Reviews for Helping me through
| filmtheory |
05/15/06 - 07:13PM |
7: Chapter Six |
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Not a boring chapter at all. There was good character nand relationship development. I wonder how things will go between SPike and Lena. Hmmm . . .
Author's Response: Things are going to get very interesting....at least I hope lol. Thanks for review! |
| axel |
05/01/06 - 07:43PM |
8: Chapter Seven |
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It's not bad. A little short, but Ok. I hope you get time to do more. Byt the way, when are you going to do the Arean?
Author's Response: Hopefully soon. |
| Cheza |
04/27/06 - 01:38PM |
8: Chapter Seven |
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Yet again, I agree that your to hard on yourself. the only thing I wuld change is, a lot to much "love"s . He should like, ask her name or something lol. Theres also, Pet, and niblet, and doll and dove, etc. *Hugs* let me kno when ur next chapter is up, I already messaged u to let u kno that mine r.
Author's Response: Thanks for all the helpful comments. I really appreciate them. As for the love bit...hmm I really don't have an explantion for that one lol. But I see what you mean I did use it a lot. Thanks for the reviews! |
| Cheza |
04/27/06 - 01:36PM |
7: Chapter Six |
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| Lol thats what I hate about any fanfiction with spike and a new love interest- theres always that damned buffy! As for writting spike, I think you did good cept I dont think he would say "fuck", I recently learned that to the british, Bloody and fuck mean the same thing, its just their word for it. |
| Cheza |
04/27/06 - 01:34PM |
6: Chapter Five |
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| I agree, I like that she could see his soul in his eyes. Same advice about the dialoge thou, maybe instead of like this
"he"she"he"she"
more of a
"he"
"she"
"he"
etc with a tad more detail other than just convo, but its still a good story. |
| Cheza |
04/27/06 - 01:32PM |
5: Chapter Four |
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| Eeeeee! |
| Cheza |
04/27/06 - 01:31PM |
4: Chapter Three |
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Lena does remind me alot of faith, you know, the whole dark slayer thing. I would have spaced out the dialoge a little bit to make it easier to read, but other than that, good.
Author's Response: Lena is pretty screwed up, but I don't plan on having her mess up as much as Faith did. |
| Cheza |
04/27/06 - 01:28PM |
3: Chapter Two |
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| I liked it, I agree with the Faith comment, but after the final ep of Buffy I was wondering that myself like, dude what happens if some of the new slayers go all baddie? then what u kno? I like this chapter, thou I dont really understand why it wuld take so long for her to get a watcher, but eh, its still good. |
| Cheza |
04/27/06 - 01:26PM |
2: Chapter One |
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| Does it say at the end of Angel what Spike does do after everything? I hate not having cable! Good story thou. |
| Cheza |
04/27/06 - 01:23PM |
1: Prologue |
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| short but good, very descriptive. |
| terry |
04/20/06 - 03:00PM |
8: Chapter Seven |
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You're too hard on yourself! I liked how you kept hinting about Lena and that there's more to her. Can't wait until SPike and the readers get there.
Author's Response: Your too kind! Thanks for the review. |
| Hellsbuttmonkey |
04/19/06 - 01:13PM |
8: Chapter Seven |
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This is looking to be a really good story, keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) |
| Peaches Girl |
04/18/06 - 09:24PM |
8: Chapter Seven |
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Awe, poor Lena. She should tell Spike her problems I'm sure he would help her. Update soon.
Author's Response: She really should tell him about her problems but shes been hurt so many times that she doesn't trust anybody. Thanks for the review. |
| terry |
03/17/06 - 06:16PM |
7: Chapter Six |
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Very interesting. I wonder if Lena will learn about Buffy. And if so, will she be jealous?
Author's Response: Lena will eventually learn about Buffy. As for her being jealous, you'll have to wait and see. ;) Thanks for reviewing! |
| Monkey Pants |
01/20/06 - 07:03PM |
5: Chapter Four |
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| Aha! Enter Spike, guaranteed to stir things up a bit! Another great cliffhanger, though I'm hoping that Spike heroically avoids this stake.... |
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