Reviews for Waking Dream
| Shay |
08/09/05 - 07:28PM |
1: One and Only |
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I am a big fan of poetry, and try to review when I see poetry on SFA. I loved the way you had such beautiful flow, without over doing the rhyming. Not everything has to rhyme, and I'm glad other people understand that! Some people don't think it's real poetry if it doesn't rhyme, and I think that is rubbish! I loved your poem, and I look forward to keeping up with your future works! -Marissa (Shay)
Author's Response: I really appreciate the depth of your comments - it's always terrific to get detailed feedback!! |
| tears_i_cry |
08/08/05 - 04:59PM |
1: One and Only |
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This was great. Amazing poem. I'll be sure to read your other story.
Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you enjoy it! |
| MissEdith |
08/08/05 - 02:18PM |
1: One and Only |
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This is a very good poem! Most ppl try too hard to rhyme and completely screw it up, but u managed to have good flow w/o rhyming.
Author's Response: Thankyou!! Hope you enjoy the new story I'm working on!
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| i_hate_mornings |
08/08/05 - 07:05AM |
1: One and Only |
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I love poetry and this was great. It had a nice flow and good tone. Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks man!! You are officially my first ever reviewer! Hope you enjoy my future stuff!! |
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