Reviews for On the Road
| BelovedSlayer |
11/29/05 - 01:22AM |
13: Home Sweet Home |
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Aww littlewiccan, please don't tell me that this is the last chappie??? i hate to see great fics end but really i can't do anything about it *sob sob* lol. but i want to say this, i totally enjoyed and loved reading the entire chappie from the first chappie all the way to the last one. You written everything here so well and im soo glad that i had the chance to read a awesome fic like this because it reminds me of when i go to travel to different places. trust me, ive been to many different places in my young life lol. You done an amazing awesome job on this littlewiccan!! I hope i'll see a new fic from you really soon!! keep it up!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your lovely review. I'm really happy you enjoyed the fic and I'm glad the whole traveling thing was conveyed to your likeing. Thank you so much for all your reviews its the main reason why I kept updating this fic. And don't worry I have plans to write another road trip fic eventually. : ) |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/27/05 - 01:57PM |
12: Closed for Bussiness |
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love the chappie. im so glad Pike put in some sense to Xander. i mean what the hell was Xander thinking playing those evil video games?? lol. Love the chappie and even with the demons, it makes it seem almost normal at times which is kinda odd and all. but anyways, i love love love your fic littlewiccan and im definitely looking forward to a update really soon!!
Author's Response: lol yeah someone had to stop him. haha. As always thanks for your review. |
| Timan |
11/27/05 - 01:11PM |
12: Closed for Bussiness |
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this is great. I love how you brought pike into it. keep it up
Author's Response: Thanks. : ) |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/26/05 - 03:55PM |
1: Sad Goodbyes |
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Awesome chappie littlewiccan. i didn't think Pike would even show up in the chappie much less the fic. I think those words he said here "Something weird is going on" was in the movie as well when he was about to leave L.A. Have you seen the movie? But anyways, i like the part where Xander is just trying to live somewhat normal having a job and all. it's completely normal, well... almost and that this awesome fic isn't really focused on big supernatural things which is really really a nice change from that. I'm soo glad you did a fic like this because i truly adored it and it reminds me of when i go traveling to different places as well. i just love to travel. anyways, your fic is totally awesome little wiccan and you're doing awesome on it so please update asap!!!
Author's Response: yeah I didn't think Pike would either but I don't know it just kinda worked. I don't know if that is a line. I have seen the movie but only once so I don't remeber. I love to travel too. Also I figured Xander's road trip wouldn't be one big thing it would be all these little things and mishapes because on the show they allude to the fact that his road trip dosen't go as well as he planned. Thanks for the review. |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/18/05 - 05:55PM |
9: The Trial |
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wow that was a really funny as hell chappie and as you can tell i really really enjoyed it. it made me laugh and giggle like a little girl lol!! I totally love how this awesome fic is going and im so looking forward to reading an update soon. keep up the awesome work you!!
Author's Response: Thanks....I'm glad you liked it so much. |
| Timan |
11/17/05 - 05:26AM |
8: The Preliminary Hearing |
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you can't go wrong with a chapter that includes “Everything that guy just said is bullshit... Thank you,”. good job keep it up
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like it. |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/13/05 - 06:33PM |
1: Sad Goodbyes |
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Awesome chappie. really Xander should of pick another lawyer instead of Vinny lol. please update soon
Author's Response: Yeah, well it'll turn out okay....I hope lol. Thanks for the review. |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/12/05 - 04:14PM |
7: My Cousin Vinny |
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i don't know what to say. all i can say is that i thought it was really funny reading about Xander getting himself arrested. there's something really amusing and funny about that he he. i never seen my cousin vinny but im excited as to where to see how far the chappie will go. anyways, i really enjoyed the chappie alot. i hope you can update really soon pretty please!!
Author's Response: Oh well it won't be exactly the same but the movie is very funny. Thanks for your review. |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/08/05 - 04:50PM |
6: Apocalypse Averted |
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really love the chappie although i wished it was more longer but other than that it was great. i wonder what's gonna happen now that Xander is off on his road trip again?? please update soon i really love your fic!!
Author's Response: Thanks sorry if it wasn't as long as you wanted. |
| Timan |
11/08/05 - 01:08PM |
6: Apocalypse Averted |
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This was great. loved how much detail you went into the ritual (is there something you want to tell us ; ) ). good job
Author's Response: lol, Yes, I confess. No j/k. Thanks for the review. : ) |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/06/05 - 07:25PM |
5: Apocalypse, Again? |
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I love love love how this fic is going so far! it's perfect and its really interesting to be reading about a soloar eclipse i cannot wait til read that! you're doing such a great job on this so please update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review. |
| Timan |
11/06/05 - 06:52PM |
5: Apocalypse, Again? |
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"it's the end of the world" "again?" i love those lines. keep it up it's getting really good
Author's Response: Thank You!! |
| Timan |
11/06/05 - 06:48PM |
4: Five Easy Pieces |
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| i love the idea of Xander and Angel working together. this is pretty much the dictionary definition of 'odd couple'. this chapter was really well done we were entertained and you managed to slip a product placement in as well. I bet Nestles were really happy. good job |
| Timan |
11/06/05 - 06:40PM |
3: L.A. Glamour |
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doesnt matter if the chapter is short. it's a good chapter. so are you going to be the one to tell us what happened to Xander with the male stripping job? good job
Author's Response: yep, it will all be clear by the time this is over. |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/04/05 - 09:34PM |
4: Five Easy Pieces |
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hey thanks for telling me that you updated on this i really appreciate it!! anyways, the lastest chappie is a bit grotesque bcuz of the body parts but that's ok cuz its good to see now that Angel and Xander have to work together to find a demon since they uh usually don't get along very much. And i hate to say that you did an excellent job on writing Xander since he is kinda tough to write about bcuz of his quirkiness and all lol. Anyways, i really love how this story is developing and i can't wait til see what happens next!! You are doing such a fantastic job on this awesome fic. im so happy that i caught it earlier on when the first chappie was posted. when you post the next chappie i will definitely read it for sure. please update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I always wonder when I'm writing a charcter if it sounds like them. I'm glad Xander's voice is coming out right. I'll update as soon as I can. |
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