Reviews for Best Enemies
| redmoon |
08/14/05 - 09:39PM |
12: Always Darkest Before the Dawn |
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| Ooh, they're sooo dead. I'm not sure if anyone has ever faced the wrath of a slayer like they will. |
| MissEdith |
08/14/05 - 09:12PM |
12: Always Darkest Before the Dawn |
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For a second there I was thinking Dawn might make it...guess not. I have just one issue: Giles tells Glory that she has to do the ritual tonight, but the ritual has to take place at one, very specific time.
Author's Response: Yeah... One very specific time that night... And it wasn't Giles 'telling' Glory when she was suppose to do the ritual. She obviously knows when and where the ritual is suppose to take place. |
| redmoon |
08/11/05 - 10:40PM |
10: Back up |
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I'm guessing since one of the warnings is 'character death' that this isn't going to be pretty. Very powerfully Buffy, though: "If D. dies, I'm going to kill them all." Exactly the vendetta I would expect, even against her best friends, on behalf of her sister. Well done.
Author's Response: LoL, I hate the stupid warning... I think next chapters I'm just gonna put every warning except Slash... lol it gives away the story... |
| Shay |
08/07/05 - 02:04PM |
10: Back up |
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| I'm with axel. Good story, not so happy ending? Update soon so I can read some more! -Marissa |
| axel |
08/07/05 - 02:40AM |
10: Back up |
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| I like the story, but this isn't going to have a happy ending is it. |
| redmoon |
08/05/05 - 10:10PM |
6: Negotiator |
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| Dun dun dun... is right. Harsh of Giles (though we know he kills humans, i.e. Ben, when necessary). Good chapter. P.S. Secret: I like short chapters! |
| redmoon |
08/04/05 - 11:55PM |
4: The Caring Sister |
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| Great idea for a divergent universe: i've always thought everyone took the news that D wasn't real a little too politely. Someone was bound not only to think 'evil is evil' but that the consequences of letting Glory get the key were too serious to ignore. Good work! Update soon. |
| i_hate_mornings |
08/01/05 - 07:25AM |
3: Better Days |
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| it'sm sounding really great. Keep going |
| MissEdith |
07/31/05 - 10:09PM |
2: End of an Era |
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Hmmm, nice one Xander. Compare Dawn to a vampire. That won't piss Buffy off, of course not...lol.
Author's Response: lol, of course. Although I compared the two completely on a whim it actually fits pretty well.
Thats again for the review as you know authors love reviews. Check back soon!!
Author's Response: **thanks (Fixing spelling error)
Forgive me it's Two in the Morning |
| MissEdith |
07/30/05 - 12:39PM |
1: Previously on Buffy the Vampire Slayer |
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| Hmm, this looks interesting. Please update soon. |
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