Reviews for Best Enemies
| Psyche2 |
01/16/06 - 10:41AM |
27: The Girl That Saved The World |
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| Omg, I'm crying. This is great. It really is...that was such a great twist. I hope you update again because this is fantastic! |
| Peaches Girl |
01/03/06 - 12:16AM |
26: Too Many |
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| Yes, I agree with littlewiccan. I love that you can write what they feel so freely. Great job. |
| littlewiccan |
01/02/06 - 05:03PM |
26: Too Many |
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| Wow....I just read all the chapters you wrote so far and I have to say its very good. The plot is just amazing and you have a real knack for getting inside the heads of the character. Phenomnal job! |
| MissEdith |
01/01/06 - 10:57PM |
24: In The Arms Of The Angel |
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| Oh no, they're going to Buffy's funeral aren't they? Oh gosh. If you write that chapter, and I hope you do, I'm sensing waterworks. |
| axel |
12/30/05 - 11:02PM |
24: In The Arms Of The Angel |
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| I'm a little surprised to see this again, but I'm glad your doing, more. Keep it up. |
| MissEdith |
10/14/05 - 02:21PM |
23: One Hundred and Eighty Degrees |
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Oh, that was an excellent ending. It was incredibly sad, but it was just so right. And as axel said, it could be a happy ending. Just depends on how you look at it. My only complaint is that the others didn't apologize too. Buffy says she's sorry, and Willow says not to worry about it, and that's all well and good but couldn't she had thrown in a "we're sorry too"?
Author's Response: Thanks for the Review MissEdith I'm happy you enjoyed my story... umm I don't know if the question is rhetorical or not but I'll answer it... Its one of those moments you gotta think about... Was Willow too worried about Buffy to remember that she should apologize to? Is willow gonna turn back on that day and ask herself why she didn't apologize? Or was Willow not sorry for what she and the others had done?
As a reader that's yours to interpret.
also i think i might either open a new story... or add a new chapter where i just take questions... this is my first actual completed story, my second story and some have really come to like it ... so i want to take questions, complaints and suggestions because I do plan to revise it on day and I do want to become a better writer and I want to use this information in my future works...
thanks again everyone for R & R |
| axel |
10/13/05 - 10:21PM |
23: One Hundred and Eighty Degrees |
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| Is this a tragic ending, or a Happy one? Yes Buffy died, but she's with her mother, and sister now. And her friends, have to live with the knolege, of what they did, and will probably not go where Buffy is, when they die. Sorry for getting to philosophical. Anyway, if this is the last chapter, it's a great one. This has been one of my favoret's on this site, Thanks. |
| BelovedSlayer |
10/13/05 - 09:19PM |
1: Previously on Buffy the Vampire Slayer |
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| love the latest chappie but it was completely sad at the same time at what happened to the Slayer. i thought the chappie was emotionally powerful and kina sorrowful especially at the beginning of the chappie. You did a super excellent job on this. If there's a another chappie coming i look forward to reading it. Bravo!! |
| redmoon |
10/11/05 - 10:29PM |
22: The Other Side Of You |
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| Hey - this is in response to another review I've read. I just want to say "don't knock pointless plot lines! I adore them for their sheer abuse of the literary process! What's the real freedom of artistic license if you have silly guidelines like 'logic' to follow? Granted, sometimes 'natural progression' can save santiy and makes stories a little easier to follow, but hey! If I wanted to save my sanity, I wouldn't wake up every morning!" That's all I wanted to say. [end rant] |
| slayerfest |
10/11/05 - 08:43PM |
22: The Other Side Of You |
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| Whoa.
Whoa.
Okay, where to start.
Intense.
This is very intense. You've got most people in mortal danger here. It's very gripping. I kept reading because it's very descriptive and still good writing. But my question is, where are you going to take this? Where is it going to go? Either Angel will stop Buffy, or he won't. As I said, definitely gripping, but you may want to revisit the storyline.
I did enjoy reading it. You're an excellent author. You're just capable of more. |
| slayerfest |
10/11/05 - 08:29PM |
17: Help |
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| The last sentence of this chapter isn't complete. It's missing a word or two. Just wanted to let you know.
The story is very descriptive and well-written. A little brutal, but good nonetheless. Congrats. |
| slayerfest |
10/11/05 - 08:20PM |
6: Negotiator |
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| Aaaugh. Evil Giles. Good stuff. |
| slayerfest |
10/11/05 - 08:16PM |
2: End of an Era |
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| Whooo. Excellent dialogue and narrative. I'm terribly impressed. Captivating. |
| BtVS Air |
10/11/05 - 06:40PM |
1: Previously on Buffy the Vampire Slayer |
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| OMGOSH! 0_0 update asap! |
| axel |
10/11/05 - 04:49PM |
22: The Other Side Of You |
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| DAMN. That's all I can say. |
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