Reviews for Whisper
| Cynthia Taz |
02/20/06 - 02:08AM |
10: Home |
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| Great story! I'm so glad to see Spike came through saving Willow. Please update soon. :) |
| BelovedSlayer |
10/08/05 - 12:19AM |
10: Home |
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| hey Shay first off i wanna say i miss you here on the website. i'm so thankful you had the chance to review my stories and now i will do the same here even though i have reviewed already. please come back soon lol!! chappie 10 is really fantastic and i could see Spikey and Willow are together which is great. as for the last part of the chappie, Did i read right that Damian said he was going to bring back Angelus, William the Bloody, and the Master?? The same Master who killed Buffy in Season !?? Now *that* should be super interesting i can't wait for the update. this fic is so good, im gonna add this to my faves and please please update soon!! You are doing such an amazing job on this!! Keep it up!!! |
| Sinister |
09/26/05 - 08:06PM |
10: Home |
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I read all the chapters and I think this is a really really good story. I'm adding it to my favorites list. The whole Willow and Spike thing was a little weird at first but it was actually a good match up in the end. It lookes like its finished but you have that its not. I'm interested to see what else you can add to it. Keep up the writing your stories are really good!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I have not gotten a review for this in a little while! I'm currently attempting to finish 'The Generations', because I feel like I never get anything done. (just look at the dozen or so things I have posted on here!) I'm glad the oddness of Willow/Spike passed quickly, because they are not going anywhere! This is a Willow-centric fic, and she and Spike are not finished yet! I'm very excited about some of the upcoming chaptes (which I will post when I have the chapters done that go between them!) Thanks again for the review, I hope you continue to enjoy my work! -Marissa |
| axel |
08/20/05 - 10:52AM |
9: Secrets |
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Good chapter, but It still reminds me of Dracula. Don't feel bad though, look at some of my work, so far I've ripped off Dark Shadows, The hills have eyes, Childern of the Corn, The Outsiders, The Dukes of Hazard, and of coarse Buffy. So your not the worst one. Keep it up.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks for the review. I didn't intentionally rip off Dracula, I just want the readers to understand how powerful this vampire is. I sort of ripped off the Master (which is ok, because hey Buffy fic!) because it's about the Order. Well, thanks again for the review, I hope you enjoy my next chapter! -Marissa |
| axel |
08/16/05 - 09:12PM |
7: Gone |
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I thought at first, Damian, was going to turn out to be Dracula, there disription's were simalar, plus The real Dracula, was a member of the Order of the Dragon (It's to late for a history lession Axel) Anyway I'm sure what ever they want with her, it's nothing bad (Right). Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you for the information on Dracula, but no, Damian and Dracula are not the same vamp. I'm sorry for any confusion my descriptions may have caused, I was just trying to describe how hypnotic Damian was. He is old (not as old as the Master) and has many of the Masters abilities. (if you recall the Master had a hypnotic thrall over people as well...until Buffy kicked his ass!) Anyway, of course the Order is up to nothing bad...why would they be bad when they can work on the side of the good, and help people! Again, sorry for the mass confusion, I'm glad you are still enjoying it, and just for you (and others! hehe) I will put up the next chapter "Intermission Pt. 2" Hope you enjoy! -Marissa
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| axel |
08/14/05 - 11:40AM |
6: Moving On |
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I still like the story, but, I'm just not buying Willow, and Spike. I don't think its your fault really, I didn't like when Buffy and Spike got together ether. It just seemed out of character for her. It was bettere when he got his soul, but before, it just didn't make sence, But, it's just a small problem, other wise good job.
Author's Response: Thank you, and I'm very sorry. I completly agree with you. In the chapter I am currently writing, I am really trying to explain how Spike could have feelings for Willow, and vice versa. It really is a tad out of character for both of them. I'm trying to create an emotional connection between the two, as well as a need that Willow feels. After Oz leaves her, she feels desperate and alone. It's almost as though she needs someone in her life to take care of, and Spike is in the biggest need of someone at the time. I'm sorry, don't you just hate challenge guidelines?! Well, thanks for the review, and I'm glad you are enjoying the rest. I hope you buy their relationship a little more in my next chapter...Thanks again! -Marissa |
| BelovedSlayer |
08/13/05 - 01:33PM |
1: The silence is deafening |
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this is pretty good but i wish the first chappie had some action in it. it cant be true that Buffy and will are fighting theyre been and are best friends and sob sob and whats up with Spike falling in love with Red here?? lol.
Author's Response: Continue reading to uncover more on the Willow/Buffy friendship! And Spike...what to say about Spike?! It was part of the challenge to make either him or Angel fall in love with Willow, and I think I'm leaning more towards Spike. *for many reasons I can't reveal or else this response would be a spoiler!* I'm glad you liked it, and I'm sorry about the lack of action in the first chapter, I was just trying to introduce the story plot, the chapters afterwards gradually build in action, to be culminated in a chapter I'm working on now. I hope you continue to enjoy Whisper, thank you for your review, and keep up the good work on your Hunter sequel! -Marissa |
| BabeBuffy |
08/10/05 - 03:32AM |
5: Imagery |
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wow, i love it write more NOW, PLEASE MAKE BUFFY COME BACK YOU SHOULD HAVE LET THE EMPATH DEMON CAPTURE BUFFY ANGEL GO TO SAVE HER AND OLD FEELING STIRR UP!!!
Author's Response: I love reviews with so many CAPS! It makes me feel like I'm doing something right! I originally thought I would have them get captured, but it interferred with some things that I have later on in the story. I already have some chapters from later on written and will hopefully be posting the newest chapter within the hour! Thanks for reviewing! -Marissa |
| axel |
08/09/05 - 11:43PM |
5: Imagery |
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I like the Chapter, but, I couldn't help but notice, that Buffy, and Willow's talk, sounded a lot like my last review, Fro shame, for shame (just kidding). Speaking of me taking credit I don't deserve, How's that chapter of More romantic than truth, coming?
Author's Response: I'm sorry about their conversation! There was an add on to the challenge and I decided to go ahead and write it in. And you very much so deserve credit for More romantice than truth, and so far I only have a few sentences. It is harder than I thought to write! Thanks for the review, I post so I can see your take on the chapter! -Marissa |
| BabeBuffy |
08/09/05 - 02:08PM |
1: The silence is deafening |
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come on your killing me here! it would shake things up if buffy comes to LA to get willow to see her in bed with spike and angel walks in to see willow n spike in bed with buffy just shocked! thats just an idea. UPDATE ASAP!
Author's Response: Who knows, maybe I'll try and work in your suggestion! It would be interesting to see that situation. I already know what is going to happen in Chapter 7 *which I wrote and completed one day when I had ran out of inspiration for the chapter I had been working on!* So I know something about Spike and Willow that will be revealed in the next few days. I hope you guys are thrown for a loop with the big reveal, because I hope it is something you didn't see coming! Well that's all of my semi-spoiler for the day, thanks for the review, it's inspiring! -Marissa |
| BabeBuffy |
08/08/05 - 02:53AM |
4: Intermission |
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MORE MORE MORE PLEASE NOW!!!!
Author's Response: I'll get right on it! Actually, I'm in the process of writing the next chapter, so I should have an update by tonight or tomorrow morning at the least. Thanks for your review, I like to know that people are enjoying my work! -Marissa |
| axel |
08/07/05 - 09:41PM |
4: Intermission |
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(I know I was horrieble to you guys, but being the Slayer makes me diffrent, and the only way to deal some times, is to be a bitch to all my friends. But, I love you guys, I'm nothing with out you. Please forgive me, and, I promise not to do it again, for at least a mouth.) When are they going to wise up? Sorry about draging that out, but I like to talk. Anyway the story's good, so don't be so hard on yourself.
Author's Response: Now why didn't I just have her say that to begin with? Haha! I have performance issues, so I'm often hard on myself. I'm very glad you are enjoying the story, it's always good to put up a chapter and then see you have read and reviewed it! And don't worry, I have a trophy or something when it comes to talking...let's just say I like to talk...all the time! Thanks again for the review, it's always an inspiration! -Marissa |
| axel |
08/04/05 - 01:41AM |
3: The Order |
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So Doyle's alive, I wonder how that will efect everythig in the future (could it mean no Connor). Sorry, I know you probably won't go that far. Anyway the story is still going good (A little rushed, but I think thats OK). I,m intrested in the Order, and what there up to.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! The Order, will of course, be up to NO good! And thanks for the rushed bit. I was afraid it was too rushed, so I'm going to go back and flesh it out before I continue forward. I'll try to do that and update the next chapter as soon as possible. Your reviews are keeping me willing to update quickly!
-Marissa |
| axel |
08/01/05 - 11:44PM |
2: Echo |
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I like the story so far, I'm not sure about Willow, and spike, but I'll give it a chance. Good job.
Author's Response: In the challenge I could choose between Willow/Spike or Willow/Angel. I still haven't fully decided which one I will pick. They both have secret feelings for her, Spike's are very obvious, but with Angel it may just be a friendship thing. Willow also has a secret crush on Spike and thinks of Angel as 'just a friend' but so far her relationship with Spike is not a 'relationship' he is just a sexy British, evil vampire! I'll try and update soon, I'm working on the rest of chapter two and some of chapter three right now, I've had a slight case of writers block on chapter two so I'm skipping around a bit, but I'll update soon because of your reviews! Thanks again for your review, they really help me get over that 'wall' of writers block! -Marissa |
| axel |
07/30/05 - 09:55PM |
1: The silence is deafening |
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Damn, Buffy sure turned into a bitch fast (I'm sure the Angel thing won't bother her at all) . Good story so far.
Author's Response: Yeah, that was part of the challenge, but don't worry, things will work out! And can I just take this moment to worship you? I have not had a review for any of my new stuff and I was beginning to worry. So, THANK YOU!!!! And I'm glad you are enjoying, check out some of my other stuff if you have the time. I had a burst of inspiration a few weeks ago, and have been writing like crazy. Thanks again for the review! -Marissa |
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