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Reviews for Déjà vu




terry 09/02/05 - 02:10AM 1: The Amulet Signed
Awesome story! You need to update like right now. I'm seriously wondering what happens next.

Author's Response: *winks* This is a round robin you know?! Hehe. Anyway, thank you for the review. I would like to see an update on Addictions some time! Thanks again, happy reading and writing! -Marissa

punk 08/14/05 - 10:35PM 1: The Amulet Signed
Hey! Loved the dialogue - especially at the start... I could literally picture the gang together!! Some great threads to carry on with... Very well done!

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the review! Would you by any chance like to contribute? I set it as a round-robin, but no one has added anything yet. I would love to have you contribute if you are interested! I'm going to try and get out some new chapters for all the stories I have posted on her, since I've been getting more reviews lately. I'm glad you enjoyed my dialogue, I had a feeling that the chapter was too rushed...what did you think? Thanks again for the review, I practically live off of them. Oh, and by the way, update your story soon! -Marissa

axel 08/01/05 - 11:34PM 1: The Amulet Signed
Yes, I think we know who sent the letter, but was the Master alive before the they found the amulet, or after, just wondering, anyway Keep it up.

Author's Response: Axel, I'm beginning to love you! I love getting reviews! And yes, I'm sure you know who sent the letter, and the Master was alive after they found the amulet. I will go back and try to write that a little more clearly, because I thought the same thing to myself when I read over it last night. And feel free to contribute if you have any inspiration for the story, it is a round-robin! Thanks again! -Marissa

filmtheory 07/31/05 - 03:07PM 1: The Amulet Signed
Great story. The banter was perfect. Paid vacation- hah! But the real strength of this story is the suspense. The beginning is very ominous. I really like how you set it up with that simple mystery; what’s the deal with the amulet. It definitely snagged my attention. I hope you keep going with this, especially with that cliffhanger at the end. (I think I know who sent the letter, but I have no idea what the letter's about).

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I was afraid no one had even read this story. I have it set as a round-robin, and hope someone will contribute. I have a short scene that occurs later on the same morning Buffy finds the envelope. You are probably correct in your suspicions of who sent the envelope, and there is no actual 'letter' so don't worry about that! Just a drawning of Dawn...*plays ominous music* Well, again I say, thanks for the review, it has given me the inspiration to continue this story! -Marissa
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