Reviews for All things in the end
| babydoll |
08/22/05 - 10:34AM |
1: Everything changes |
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Cool I love it . It is so cool you Jesse in this story ! It is a grate story to. Please keep it up. And I got to ask is this going to end whith D/J togeter and please please keep writing I love this story.well I got to go now latter.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review, and I am glad you are enjoying it! I got the inspiration to use Jesse by an idea I came up with nearly a year ago. I thought it would be neat to create a history and story for some of the more minor characters, including-guess who?-Jesse! My next chapter will be a little of Jesse history, this will include his nearly life-long friendship with Xander and Willow, and his last living days.
As to your question about Dawn and Jesse getting together, it is a possibility. Neither Jesse or Dawn have ever had an actual "relationship" on the show, and I thought it would be interesting to see how a relationship would turn out for them. That may or may not include them dating, but this story is not going to be Dawn/Jesse-centric. This is just an alternate Season 7, and if romances are formed, then so be it! Again, thank you for the review, and I'll go and write up that next chapter for you! -Marissa |
| punk |
08/14/05 - 10:48PM |
1: Everything changes |
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"Willow had known Xander to come by this early, but it normally only happened when the world was ending." - Great line!! I really liked the introduction of Jesse, though at the start I was a little confused by the logic of his return. As the story developed though I just accepted it and let the story flow - which I felt it did really well. Kudos!
Author's Response: First off, I would like to thank you with every fiber of my being! You are officially my first review for this story! I was worried that maybe people didn't like it, so thank you! I'm sorry about the confusion at the beginning, I tried to work it in well, but to tell you the truth, it's just a little confusing to write too! Since you so kindly reviewed this for me, I will go ahead and post some new chapters within the week! Thanks again, I love reviews, and I'm glad you enjoyed my attempts at humor! -Marissa |
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