Reviews for New World Rising, Pt. 2
| Icequeen |
02/04/06 - 10:58PM |
14: Author's Note |
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| please update soon!! |
| MissEdith |
08/21/05 - 11:30PM |
13: Breathless |
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| 1) I like that you haven't made the main character the leader just because she's the main character. I always find myself curious about the people who aren't in the spotlight. 2) I love Wesley asking Anne for threes...beautiful. 3) I think it was in the first paragraph, you said "seperate" when it should be "separate". Um...what else...oh, my off-the-top-of-my-head theory about why David's Summers blood is important: it's the blood of the key (I'm reaching, but oh well)? Oh, and as for reviewing frequently, you're welcome. I try to review pretty much everything I read cuz I hate not knowing what people are thinking of my story. |
| always angel |
08/21/05 - 10:15PM |
13: Breathless |
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| Sneaking off to make out in the janitors closet...reminds me of Xander and Cordy. Liz really takes after her father in a lot of ways. |
| rockangelz25 |
08/20/05 - 01:02PM |
1: Battle-Ready |
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| Grrr. Sorry I haven't reviewed.
Poor Liz--two weeks stuck in solitary. And for her birthday, too. Of course, David made up for it.... I liked it lots... The chemistry is great, and it's nice to see it finally come out. The end of the chapter made me laugh every time 've read it so far. Yea..... Update again soon, please??? |
| MissEdith |
08/19/05 - 10:51PM |
12: First Date |
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| That was an excellent chapter. Really. 2 weeks in solitary. Rough. This may seem like a strange question, but have you read Solitaire by Kelley Eskridge? It's a really good book in which this woman is forced to spend several years in solitary. It's one of the best books I've read in a while. Hmm, where was I? Oh ya. Reviewing, :P The onion blossom thing was perfect. And the apologizing. And the end. |
| always angel |
08/19/05 - 01:38PM |
12: First Date |
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| I was wondering when she would find out hes Buffy's nephew. She really is slow. And I agree with you. The end of this chapter is now my favorite. |
| MissEdith |
08/15/05 - 06:26PM |
11: Aftermath |
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| Yay, they finally kissed. Now I hope they don't try to rationalize it or deny it or w/e. And thanx for the compliment about the username. It occurred to me a while ago that ppl might think i should be writing about drusilla, but i don't. hmm. maybe someday i'll think of a story for her...oh well. what was i saying? um...good chapter? update soon? that seems like a good guess.... |
| always angel |
08/15/05 - 01:58AM |
11: Aftermath |
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| I like this story so much but I have to say that this chapter is my favorite. I'm so happy that they finally got togther. :) |
| always angel |
08/15/05 - 12:25AM |
10: Virtual Nightmare, Part Three |
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| So CG isn't Angelus? Hmmm...and I was so sure he was. The whole be seeing you line made me think of Ethan Rayne but it couldn't be him ...could it?. I liked the reunion between Liz and David. Does this mean that they're finally gonna get togethger? |
| MissEdith |
08/14/05 - 08:58PM |
10: Virtual Nightmare, Part Three |
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| Now the "Be seeing you" line makes me think of Ethan....Anyway, what was I going to say....I loved Liz and David's reunion, with her hitting him and all that. I especially like the way that you didn't describe her hitting him, just showed it through the dialogue. Very nice. Can't wait for the next chapter. And damn all schoolwork that says I should be frantically working instead of reading fanfic... |
| gogo_girlie |
08/12/05 - 12:31AM |
9: Virtual Nightmare, Part Two |
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| Okay, that's it, I'm writing you a note dismissing you from school till this story is finished. I'm like obsessed with it. I just can't help myself. Lol. |
| always angel |
08/11/05 - 12:49AM |
9: Virtual Nightmare, Part Two |
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| Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| MissEdith |
08/10/05 - 12:56AM |
9: Virtual Nightmare, Part Two |
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| I knew there was a reason I spend hours in front of the computer...because then when I refresh the page there may be updates waiting for me! *Sigh* I have no life. But oh well. Awesome chapter! That was so perfect with Brett and Liz! |
| rockangelz25 |
08/09/05 - 07:03PM |
9: Virtual Nightmare, Part Two |
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| Oh. Cannot wait to see what happens next. Cloak Guy is so evilish. And yet.
Also, can't wait to see what happens to Brett, and Rachel and David. Do the two groups meet, split and meet, or what?
Most importantly, PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON! *loves it* Also, thanks for the book info. |
| Madie |
08/09/05 - 12:58PM |
8: Virtual Nightmare, Part One |
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| I'm really lovin this story. I can't wait for an update so i'm hoping it comes soon. You've done a really good job developping the characters and everything. Keep it up!!! |
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