Reviews for Stripped
| faith_slayer89 |
07/07/05 - 12:53PM |
6: Sisterly Bonding - Brussels |
Signed |
Eep - Neglectful Buffy, I do not like. It would be a bit easier to understand if you stuck with either past or present tense and stopped switching between the too. Good chapter, though. Looking forward to more updates.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments. I don't mean for Buffy to be neglectful exactly. She is just dealing with a lot of her own stuff and doesn't realize what she is doing at the moment. Never Fear, she will soon! |
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