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Reviews for Angel Season 5 (Redux)

CelesteAvonne	05/17/06 - 11:04PM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
Dang, Kevin! This is really, really good. I laughed at Lorne kicking Angel under the table. I like your Connor. I'm looking forward to reading the rest. Nice work! Author's Response: Wow- thanks so much for being soooo nice. I always worry that my funny parts won’t be funny, so I’m glad you laughed at Lorne kicking Angel. Hopefully you’ll keep liking my Connor and my story. Thanks so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts.

BloodThirstyGoddess	04/18/06 - 05:29PM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
I love this chapter. You put so much work into the character's feelings, its unbelieveable! Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm so glad you appreciate the drama :)

slayerfest	03/21/06 - 09:37PM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
I just read the first chapter, and I'm immensely hooked. I'll be sure to keep reading... once I finish the real season. Heh. Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Once you finish the real season and read my version, be sure to drop me a line and let me know what you think.

dutchgirl	02/14/06 - 01:00PM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
Loved the new update! Great explanation on why W&H wanted Angel to take the deal and about the Quortoth energy. Loved the way you introduced Spike in to the season. Great way for Cordy to have her first new vision after her comeback and ofcourse a new plot twist. And the part where Connor asked Fred out on a date was very funny. Looking forward to the new chapter! Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again. I wanted to have the best parts of season 5 and season 4. I thought this was a good way to put it all together. The idea I had for the Quortoth energy is one I had after the season 4 finale. I worried about writing the Connor asking Fred out bit for a couple reasons. First, I was a fraid people would be grossed out like they were with ConCord. Second, I wanted to be funny, which I worried my writing wouldn't be. I'm glad you thought it was funny. Thanks so much for the review. It really keeps me going.

Quortoth	01/26/06 - 09:34AM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
I loved the first chapter, I like Conner with long hair as well. And I never thought of Conner being a hockey player, cool. I'm going to read more today of your stories. Author's Response: Thanks. I hear the actor has his hair long these days, so I thought I'd go with that. As for the hockey player, the reason for that was the itty biddy hocky sticks from the episode "Provider." Thanks for reading my stuff and taking the time to leave feedback. It means a lot to me.

Violet SS	12/05/05 - 11:34PM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
Chapter 1 Review. Great start! Nice short intro to the AI gang. Strong development of Connor's family. They are so very normal. Gotta admit, you lost me a bit on the hockey part (not a hockey fan). What's superb: The reminder that Angel had bought Connor hockey sticks. Fred worried about her employees. The scientology coment. The way you write Eve--you nailed her character. What could use work: Tighten it up a bit. Sometimes you use a little too much exposition. (I struggle with this myself!) Can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hoped keeping the exposition interspersed with other material would keep it from getting too dry. I always liked the itty bitty hockey sticks, too. I’m glad I got Eve down. She’ll be integral to the story in a few ways and I hope to get a little deeper into her than the show did.

Angeldove	10/19/05 - 12:37AM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
I know I reviewed by e-mail, but I needed to also post one here. I am very impressed, and hope that I will be able to find the time to continue reading, you have me hooked!!! Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I was just a reader on this site for a long time and this is my first attempt at fanfic. You definitley had a major influence on my writing so it's good to know you like it.

jl1980	10/04/05 - 07:51PM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
I love this!! It's so well-written, great dialogue, true to the characters...it really reads just like an episode of the show, only better! I've only read the first episode so far, but I'm adding to my fave list and will be keeping up with your updates!!! Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I really like the characters (yes, even Connor). I hate how season 5 kind of let them down. So, I’m hoping to preserve Wes, Fred, and Gunn, while keeping Connor in the story. I hope I can make it work.

Angels Shadow	09/28/05 - 04:00PM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
Oh, and one more thing - gotta love the hockey - huge hockey nut talking here :) Author's Response: I had to have the hockey! First of all, I think it adds a really cool dimensionI had to have the hockey! First of all, I think it adds a really cool dimension. But also, I always wished the show followed up on Connor to take up hockey the way his dad wanted. It seems like the sort of detail W&H would have thrown in for him. Plus, I can hopefully write lots of fast-paced hockey action!

Angels Shadow	09/28/05 - 03:58PM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
Excellent story - you've definitely got major talent - its very well written and thought out. I'm anxious to see what all goes down in your version of season 5 ... keep updating :) Author's Response: I'll kee updating if you keep reviewing! Thanks for the review. It was very nice and, of course, let me konw that people are actually reaidng this.

lieselot	09/20/05 - 07:05AM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
Hi, I like your season 5 of angel, I like the dialouge, it's very well writing, I can't wait to read more of you episodes Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hope to have another episode up soon, so your wait shouldn't be too long.

BloodThirstyGoddess	08/28/05 - 10:03PM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
I love your version of Season 5. It's extremely well written and thought out. I loved how you mentioned Angel giving Conner the hockey sticks as a baby and so Conner's growing up to be a hockey player, creavite idea. Author's Response: Thanks. Few people seem to like my version of season 5, so it's always appreciated to hear from people who do like it. I always thought Connor should have been a bitching hockey player. With super powers, encouragement from dad, and itty bitty hockey sticks, Connor would definitely been the next Yagr had Holtz not kidnapped him. Stupid Sahjhan.

LuVAtSBtvS	08/09/05 - 08:15PM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
I really like it! You had Wesley shot! I hope he will be ok! Author's Response: Glad you like it. I don't want to be spoilery, so no hints on Wesley's fate.

punk	08/08/05 - 09:29PM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
Talk about raising the bar! A great idea, and really well put together. Very impressive! Author's Response: Hey- thanks. Not to many people are reading or reviewing, so it means a lot to hear from you. I hope you like it as much when I've put the rest up.

LuVAtSBtvS	07/19/05 - 07:34PM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
Very cool! I like your version of Season 5. I would love to do my own to. Can I do one also? I wasnt sure cause I saw other people doing there own version so I figured I probably cant now Author's Response: Thanks. You should definitley do your own Season 5. Just because someone else is running with an idea doesn't mean you can't try your own and put your own spin on it. That's what fanfic is all about!

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