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Reviews for Angel Season 5 (Redux)

dutchgirl	12/08/05 - 08:20AM	7: 5.07: Moral Compass	Signed
This story is just so great!! There were so many things things that I missed in Angel season 5: for one Connor, I was so pissed they had written him out, than the so called 'tension' between fred/wesley/gunn just disapeared and nobody questioned why Angel all of a sudden had taken the deal! So I totally love this story so far!! Hope you update soon can't wait to find out how this story is going to unfold!! Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and for reading. I really missed a lot of those elements in season 5 also. Loved Connor, so I was pissed he was gone. Same for Cordy. And yeah, what about the Gunn/Wes tension. I hope to have more up soon.

Violet SS	12/06/05 - 09:07PM	3: 5.03: October Surprises	Signed
It just gets better. I like the tension between Wes and Gunn, though I don't really understand why they'd be pissed at each other if their memories have been wiped of all Conor related info (of course, I deal with this mystery in my own stories). I especially liked the exchange about daylight. I'm totally hooked on the Connor / Eve storyline. Totally different from anything I've read before. And, I know he wasn't in this chapter much, I hate Connor's "dad"--he seems really ridiculous to me, like he's jealous of his son or something. Oh yeah, the description of the boy (in the white room) was great! Author's Response: Thanks for yet another review. I really appreciate you putting this kind of time and thought into discussing my story. I always considered the Wes/Gunn tension to be over Fred, which should still be an issue. I don’t remember Wes or Gunn ever having any friction over Connor. Also glad that you’re hooked on the Connor/Eve storyline. There are a lot of directions I want to go with it, so it’s taking up more of the story than I’d planned. Therefore, if everyone hated them, everyone would probably hate my story as well. As for Laurence, I may have overshot things. He’s definitely overprotective and a bit too intrusive, but I’m definitely not going for jealous. I’ll have to look over his material and edit it if he’s coming off as too jealous. But annoying, overbearing, and ridiculous, yeah. That would work. (He’s heavily based on my own father. In fact, you might want to replace “heavily” with “entirely”). I’m also so, so glad you liked the boy in the white room. He’ll have a bigger role as things progress.

Violet SS	12/06/05 - 08:47PM	2: 5.02: Liaise	Signed
You've done a great job with Eve. I absolutely hated her on the show. I literally dreaded any scenes that she was in. But somehow you've managed to stay true to her character and still make her not only tolerable, but interesting. You've even gotten me interested in the hockey thing. Emma's comment about the money was so innocent and funny. Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I know exactly what you mean about hating Eve. Although I desperately, desperately want to take credit for an improved yet true to character Eve, I think the problem with Eve on the show wasn’t that she was well written, but that Sarah Thompson (the actress playing her) wasn’t very good in the role. All I’ve done is stayed true to the writing. Luckily your imagination has excluded the weaker aspects of Miss Thompson’s performances. I’m so happy you’re liking the hockey bit a little more. I have a confession to make. I know NOTHING about hockey. I’ve looked stuff up on the internet and played EA Sports NHL 2003 to try to get some realism in there. (For example, the names of scouts, players, etc.) But I thought the hockey bits could prove interesting. And thanks for the comment on Emma’s innocence with regard to money. If there’s a theme to Connor’s subplot, it was an exchange between Connor and his mom in the first chapter about money changing their lives. I really believe that people often don’t respect money enough. I don’t think they’re wary enough of its ability to consume them or even just change them. Thanks again for the review.

spideygirl	12/06/05 - 03:28AM	7: 5.07: Moral Compass	Signed
Thank you Cordy for not letting Angel go without a scolding. I think Angel sometimes do need that. What is Eve trying to do, first thing first, is she serious with Connor..if she's not then I think she's such a bitch!! Poor Connor, always being made use so please continue your next chapter, thanks!! Can't wait for more.. Author's Response: Thjanks for the review. I've been waiting for a good Angel scolding myself. As for Eve, her intnetions toward Connor are deeply involved with the segment on her at the end. She's legitimately turned on, but it's the destruction of his innocence that's doing it.

Violet SS	12/05/05 - 11:34PM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
Chapter 1 Review. Great start! Nice short intro to the AI gang. Strong development of Connor's family. They are so very normal. Gotta admit, you lost me a bit on the hockey part (not a hockey fan). What's superb: The reminder that Angel had bought Connor hockey sticks. Fred worried about her employees. The scientology coment. The way you write Eve--you nailed her character. What could use work: Tighten it up a bit. Sometimes you use a little too much exposition. (I struggle with this myself!) Can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hoped keeping the exposition interspersed with other material would keep it from getting too dry. I always liked the itty bitty hockey sticks, too. I’m glad I got Eve down. She’ll be integral to the story in a few ways and I hope to get a little deeper into her than the show did.

spikes girl	12/05/05 - 07:07AM	7: 5.07: Moral Compass	Signed
hey, great chapter as usual. i"m glad cordy gave angel a piece of her mind, but i felt bad for him as well. and the scene between conner and eve was hot, the hand thing was kinda gross though. and i feel bad for conner, cause i don't see how this can have a happy ending. all in all, another fab chapter Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm so happy for your response. I wanted readers to be glad Cordy ripped him a new one, but also wanted som esympathy for Angel. As for Connor, yes, feel bad for him. It'll get worse from here.

Vamp19762000	12/05/05 - 02:35AM	7: 5.07: Moral Compass	Signed
I loved this chapter. The best one yet. I really liked Cordelia putting Angel in his place. I never really liked Eve, is she trying to get pregnant? Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. Someone needed to set Angel straight and Cordy's the one who could do it. Eve definitley isn't trying to get pregnant, but she is trying to do something. What it is, however, you'll just have to read and see.

axel	12/05/05 - 01:05AM	7: 5.07: Moral Compass	Signed
Great Chapter. I'm glad Cordie set Angel straight. But uh, the thing with Connor, and Eve's hand, That was F#ked up. I mean what the hell? Good job otherwise. But what the HELL? Author's Response: Sorry you didn't like the F#ked up bit. It was kind of an ode to Terry's "Addictions." Just kidding. There's a point to it. I promise. It's not just gratuitous sex.

spideygirl	11/30/05 - 04:08AM	6: 5.06: Out	Signed
Fred almost discover the truth and I can't believe Angel lied to Fred. Sign Anyway, next chapter chapter please thank you !! Author's Response: Yes, so close to having it, but . .. well, Fred probably wouldn't have believed the turth even if she heard it. Besides, I have more hijinks planned.

BloodThirstyGoddess	11/26/05 - 08:46AM	6: 5.06: Out	Signed
Awesome chapter! All that work to try and kill Cordy, wow. Can't wait for more. Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. You're way, way too sweet. I hope to write more soon.

spikes girl	11/23/05 - 10:57PM	6: 5.06: Out	Signed
hey amazing chapter as usual. i can't wait to see what happens when eveyone finds out cordy is awake! should prove to be very interesting Author's Response: I hope readers will be happy to have Cordy back for season 5. Thanks so much for continuing to read and review. It makes me all smiley.

axel	11/22/05 - 10:03PM	6: 5.06: Out	Signed
Great Chapter. I like that Connor starting to figure it out, he's a smart kid. And I'm looking forward to seeing were the end goes (I can't say, without ruining it, but you know) By the way, where you been? Author's Response: Been busy, but I'm back writing now. Connor is putting things together and he is smart. The end will set up some fun.

spideygirl	10/27/05 - 06:37AM	5: 5.05: Dead Man’s Party	Signed
Hey never expect Connor to be a hockey player man, I'm trying to imaging that..I mean its good that he is a hockey player, yeah Go Connor!! Yap, please update..thanks =D Author's Response: Not to give anything away, but Connor WILL be a hockey player. Mostly because I want to write some cool hockey playing sequences. Thanks for the review. I hope to have another chapter done at some point during my life time.

Angeldove	10/19/05 - 12:37AM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
I know I reviewed by e-mail, but I needed to also post one here. I am very impressed, and hope that I will be able to find the time to continue reading, you have me hooked!!! Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I was just a reader on this site for a long time and this is my first attempt at fanfic. You definitley had a major influence on my writing so it's good to know you like it.

spikes girl	10/10/05 - 06:57AM	5: 5.05: Dead Man’s Party	Signed
hey i love this story, though i;m wondering, are you planning on ever bringing Spike into it? the latest chapter was hilarious, Conner's little speech, "Look, Angel-cakes..." DAMN funny stuff! not to mention angel wanting to protect his s u n necklace, oh, and Wesley on morphine, priceless. update soon Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I do have plans to bring in Spike, but not permanantly. Sorry. That's all the spoiler you get. I'll try to keep it funny.

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