Reviews for Angel Season 5 (Redux)
| Quortoth |
01/26/06 - 02:31PM |
3: 5.03: October Surprises |
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I never thought about something between Eve and Conner, Conner's still got that older woman thing going on for him. Another Good story.
Author's Response: As Skip said, "magic can't change the heart of a champion." And Connor's heart (as well as other parts of his anatomy) likes older women. Personally, I think Connor and Eve are the perfect match. Two very skinny and girly looking people. Just kidding. thanks for the review. |
| Quortoth |
01/26/06 - 02:24PM |
2: 5.02: Liaise |
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You've made me suddenly interested in what Lorne is going to say :-P. I very much enjoyed that story and will read the next one now.
Very good work.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. The feedback is really encouraging, especially because I got so little at first. |
| Quortoth |
01/26/06 - 09:34AM |
1: 5.01: Hidden Talents |
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I loved the first chapter, I like Conner with long hair as well. And I never thought of Conner being a hockey player, cool. I'm going to read more today of your stories.
Author's Response: Thanks. I hear the actor has his hair long these days, so I thought I'd go with that. As for the hockey player, the reason for that was the itty biddy hocky sticks from the episode "Provider." Thanks for reading my stuff and taking the time to leave feedback. It means a lot to me. |
| Violet SS |
12/24/05 - 12:59AM |
9: 5.09: The First Law of Thermodynamics |
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Very cool reveal. I had a totally different idea in my head about the boy, but you've carefully seeded the clues throughout the story. Great payoff!
Author's Response: Yeah, I left some little clues about the boy in the white room. I was a little afraid I was overdoing it. I’m glad you consider it a great playoff and not a weak plot twist. Thanks again for all your reviews, advice, and encouragement. |
| Violet SS |
12/24/05 - 12:30AM |
8: 5.08: Urn |
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Are they ever gonna find that urn? Seriously, though, I'm so glad Cordy--the real Cordy--is back !
Author's Response: Oh, that urn will be trouble for some time to come. I think the show needed Cordy more than anyone realized before she left. She really was the heart and soul of the Angel crew. Luckily, I have no contract or monetary restrictions to keep me from writing her into the season. |
| Violet SS |
12/24/05 - 12:05AM |
7: 5.07: Moral Compass |
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Okay. So. WOW! This was a truly, truly, truly awesome chapter. Two completely different moods. The Cordy / Angel confrontation was great--I'm a little bit freaked by the fact that you write Cordy so damn well. And then, BAM! I was like 'EWWWW where is this coming from? Did I accidentally click on a completely different story?" But then there was the deep and moving reaction by Connor and the totally incredible explanation regarding Eve. So, um, yeah, this just blew me away.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. All reviews are appreciated, but any that calls it a “truly, truly, truly awesome chapter” makes me extra happy. I thought the show cheated us with Cordy and Angel. Granted, they had limited time, but Cordy would have ripped Angel a new one. And thanks, by the way, on your complimenting my writing of Cordy. Sorry for the EWWW. (I actually took out something even more EWWWW). Just to reassure you, I’m not planning to move the story into porn territory. There will be some additional references to Connor and Eve’s sex life, but I think I set the tone of their relationship. I thought it was important to establish Eve’s motives (or some of them) and Connor’s vulnerability. I’m glad that found some purchase with readers. |
| dutchgirl |
12/16/05 - 08:09AM |
9: 5.09: The First Law of Thermodynamics |
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Wow, that was one hell of a fast update, great chapters!! I like that you bring back the black energy from Quar’Toth, I had aspected that they would have brought that subject back in season 4 after seeing it in season 3 but it didn't. It defenitly can be a interesting for the story-line!! Also a smart idea to explain why cordy hasn't really talked much with the other characters (busy with work) makes it a more flowing story!!
Hope you update soon again ^^!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. The next update will probably be a while coming. I thought the black energy from Quar'Toth was a great element, too. The diconnect between people is often the cause of major problems. If people would communicate more, there'd be so much less misery in the world. I'm kind of going for that point with this story, I suppose. Thanks so much for reading it and reviewing it. |
| axel |
12/16/05 - 03:26AM |
9: 5.09: The First Law of Thermodynamics |
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Hu, intresting ending. And I'm glad Cordies back (I never really thought she was that important to the show, untill she was gone. And when she came back, everything clicked again. So they killed her, Smart.) By the way, I didn't mean to make you chance your stoy, I was just giving you a hard time. Sorry.
Author's Response: Don't worry about being sorry on the story changing. You weren't the only one who mentioned that element and I didn't wantpeople getting hung up on it. I was actually going for a point with the scene and didn't want that lost due to a gut reaction. |
| axel |
12/14/05 - 03:15AM |
8: 5.08: Urn |
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Oh Eve, you are so dead (you might not want to tell Angel, about the hand thing, ether) Good job.
Author's Response: LOL- you're reallyhung up on that hand thing. I actually owund up cutting it from the chapter, so Angel probably won't find out about it. |
| Vamp19762000 |
12/14/05 - 02:03AM |
9: 5.09: The First Law of Thermodynamics |
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Good ending. Please write more very soon.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. More is on the way. |
| spikes girl |
12/13/05 - 12:18AM |
8: 5.08: Urn |
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ohhh, Eve is so busted! and conner's " everbody love's Ray" guest spot should be interesting. great chapter again!
Author's Response: Yep. Eve's busted. You have no idea HOW busted. But that's next chapter. Thanks for revieiwng this chapter. |
| Vamp19762000 |
12/12/05 - 02:14AM |
8: 5.08: Urn |
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Love the new chapter. Keep up the awesome writing.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. It's good to know you like the story. |
| Violet SS |
12/08/05 - 09:01PM |
5: 5.05: Dead Man’s Party |
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Oh yeah, forgot to mention that the introduction of the Zombie was really well done. Connor's rejection of Angel's advances was funny. And I just really liked Eve's explanation of the company dating policy. Concise and funny.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Zombies scare the hell out of me, so I wanted to go with them as a creepy Halloween treat. I'm hoping to get more Connor/ Angel moments in the future. |
| Violet SS |
12/08/05 - 08:52PM |
5: 5.05: Dead Man’s Party |
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I was wondering who the voice was. I thought it was Cordy. Didn't even think about it being a beautiful blond woman (*wink, wink*). So happy about that if I'm right. Love that character. Think she should have been used a lot more on the show. Loved Angel's reaction to the guns being pointed at Fred! Loved Connor's musing that this was just a really elaborate Halloween trick. That sounds exactly like something W&H would do for its clients.
Author's Response: THanks for winking. I thought that particular character, whom I'm 93.8% sure you've guessed, was underused as well. Hope you like the next chapter as well. |
| Violet SS |
12/08/05 - 03:22PM |
4: 5.04: Life of the Party. Redux. |
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Okay, now I'm really curious as to what is going on with Angel and Gunn. Connor and Eve's interaction is interesting but totally wigging me out. Thank goodness she's evil, or kind of evil, or just not entirely good because otherwise it would be far too disturbing. Connor's reactions to Fred are great. Makes perfect sense to me. Screw Sirk (nice quick reminder of who he is), how dare he shoot Wesley!!!! Other nice touches--Official Eve. Gunn's party day come back. Lorne's comment on Connor's drinking (totally in character). Lorne's comment on Connor's reaction to Fred. Connor's suspicion / realization about Angel when he sees the song he's gonna sing. I sincerely hope that Lorne knows what's up with Connor now that he's heard him sing.
Author's Response: Thanks for teh review. It's so cool that you're pickin gu pon alot of the little clues I'm dropping about certain things. It's also nice to know that the jokes are falling well. I always worry about writing humor. It's a weird thing that someitmes doens't translate over writing. The bad news is Eve and COnnor will get more and more wiggy. |
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