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Reviews for Angel Season 5 (Redux)

Psyche2	02/22/06 - 01:56PM	10: 5.10: The Boy in the White Room	Signed
This is really good, I really enjoy it. Update soon! Author's Response: Thanks. I'll update as fast as I can. I hope you enjoy the rest!

Willes	02/21/06 - 11:56AM	10: 5.10: The Boy in the White Room	Signed
I just found this story and I have to say I am enjoying it very much. It's well written and the chacarter voices are brilliant!! Well done!!! Author's Response: Thanks again!

Willes	02/21/06 - 11:55AM	10: 5.10: The Boy in the White Room	Signed
I just found this story and I have to say I am enjoying it very much. It's well written and the chacarter voices are brilliant!! Well done!!! Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I think I probably have Lorne, Cordy, and Connor down, but I worry about some of the other characters.

dutchgirl	02/14/06 - 01:00PM	1: 5.01: Hidden Talents	Signed
Loved the new update! Great explanation on why W&H wanted Angel to take the deal and about the Quortoth energy. Loved the way you introduced Spike in to the season. Great way for Cordy to have her first new vision after her comeback and ofcourse a new plot twist. And the part where Connor asked Fred out on a date was very funny. Looking forward to the new chapter! Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again. I wanted to have the best parts of season 5 and season 4. I thought this was a good way to put it all together. The idea I had for the Quortoth energy is one I had after the season 4 finale. I worried about writing the Connor asking Fred out bit for a couple reasons. First, I was a fraid people would be grossed out like they were with ConCord. Second, I wanted to be funny, which I worried my writing wouldn't be. I'm glad you thought it was funny. Thanks so much for the review. It really keeps me going.

Quortoth	02/09/06 - 09:41AM	10: 5.10: The Boy in the White Room	Signed
Spike, Spike, Spike, :-) I'm excited. And I like that Eve and Conner stopped that relationship. Except for the Fred thing, It's a good idea, but kind of icky. [That's just what I think.] But other then that I find the relationship quite funny and enjoyable, I can deal. Spike, I'm glad you're going somewhere with that. Great story I can't wait for the next one. Author's Response: I’m not quite sure how long it will take to get Spike back. Or even if they’ll get him back. Ooooh. Creepy, huh? I’m sorry that you don’t like Fred and Connor. You’re also against Eve and Connor as well as Cordy and Connor. What’s up with that? You just don’t want this poor kid getting laid at all, do you? Just kidding. Thanks for reading and for sharing your thoughts. I hope to have a new one up before too long.

Quortoth	02/09/06 - 09:32AM	9: 5.09: The First Law of Thermodynamics	Signed
:-P Conner has games, funny. I like that Cordelia is like a main moral person, Angel is sinking into the darkness, Cordelia can pull him out. Or at least she has a good point, and tries hard. I like that she wants Conner to get his memories back. Author's Response: Cordy wanting to restore the Connor she knew is just another level of conflict. Eve and the Senior Partners want what's evil. Angel wants what's easy. Cordelia is the only one who wants what's right while also armed with the informaiton about what's happening. Thanks again for the review!

Quortoth	02/09/06 - 09:26AM	8: 5.08: Urn	Signed
Angel always finds out the little bits of Conner's life. [Well not really little....but....] That Eve, Angel's going to be pissed, and is, I think it might turn out bad. But the story is great. Author's Response: Yes indeed, Angel WILL be pissed. But how much can he do with his hands tied by this devi's bargain? Tune in next week and find out!

Quortoth	02/09/06 - 09:23AM	7: 5.07: Moral Compass	Signed
Wow.....I'm happy that Cordy thinks that relationship was icky too, I didn't like the whole Conner/Cordy thing. You write her very well. I feel the characters. Author's Response: I did like the Connor/Cordy thing, but I know I'm the only one who did. Plus, I really don't think CORDY would like it considering the circumstances. It's good to know I'm writing Cordy well. I was worried I didn't have her character down well. Thanks for the encouragement. It means a lot!

Quortoth	02/09/06 - 09:18AM	6: 5.06: Out	Signed
I like that Conner is finding out, and that 18 yr old boy's "estrogen content" part was very funny and the 20 questions, "Is it bigger then a bread box?" I laughed during the part, found it quite hillarious. Author's Response: I thought the estrogen level bit would be a good way to polay out the scene. It's conflict- people wanting opposing goals and scheming to get what they want. I'm sooooo glad you laughed. I was really trying to be funny in this one and was so afraid the humor would fall flat.

Quortoth	02/09/06 - 09:10AM	5: 5.05: Dead Man’s Party	Signed
Another great story. I want to see Spike in it, but I can deal if you don't have him in there. I still love reading this stuff. Author's Response: Happy to see you love reading my stories. As for Spike . . . never mind. Thanks for reading.

Quortoth	02/09/06 - 09:04AM	4: 5.04: Life of the Party. Redux.	Signed
I love hearing a good ole verse of Mandy. Great story. Author's Response: Yep, like father like son. Even after a brain washing spell. Thanks for reviewing.

axel	02/04/06 - 02:40PM	10: 5.10: The Boy in the White Room	Signed
So Gunn's evil Hu? I'm sure Wes won't have a problem, with Connor, and Gunn, HA! Everybody seem's to be after Fred. Good work. Author's Response: Yeah, Fred is the prima donna. To quote Jimmy Buffett, she's got fins to the left, fins to the right, and she's the only fish in town. Well, except Cordy, but Angel has dibbs on her.

angelandbuffy	02/04/06 - 02:35PM	10: 5.10: The Boy in the White Room	Signed
whoa... thats a cool story, lol i spent like an hour reading all of them from the beginning. REALLY great :D but buffy in there sometime xD lol XD ^_^ GREAT STORY! keep it upp.! Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm so happy my story was exciting enough to make you read all of them in one sitting. Buffy may pop up, I'm not sure yet. Thanks also for the review.

SakuraSyaoran4eva	02/04/06 - 01:12PM	10: 5.10: The Boy in the White Room	Signed
Let's be truthful, most Connor post-season 5 stories suck. This doesn't. The grammers very good and everything is very realistic + Connor's very In char. Can't wait to see where you go with this. ---"Me?” Fred asked. “No,” Connor joked. “Someone else named Fred. Any idea where he is?” Fred looked at Connor blankly. “That was sarcasm,” Connor said. “Yes. You. I was looking for you.”" This was absolutely hilarious!!!!! Fred/Connor, huh? didn't see that one coming. I really hope Connor gets to keep being the hockey star - the "real" Connor's quite boring, being evil and what-not. --" “Angle, he has a soul.” Spelled Angel wrong ---"season. My sprain my wrist and land me on the disabled list.” Huh??? Think you messed up. "Of course, if you let her go, I’ll just l" ... Messed up break here. --"Sooner or later, this would come back to haunt them all. They only way to prevent that was faving it head on." The...facing... There haven't been that many mistakes before in this story but I suppose this was hot-off-the-press. I'd suggest a beta. All in all, this is a really good story and can't wait for more. Author's Response: Yes, I really could use a beta. Are you offering by any chance? Thanks for reading and reviewing. I’m glad you like the story. I kind of like writing the “normal” Connor. Of course, he has kind of dominated the story more than I’d like. I hated how Spike kind of took over Angel, season 5. I wanted to fix that, and of course wound up doing the same thing with another character. But, for the moment, Connor’s background is kind of the overarching mystery (much the Spike’s return was in the real season 5. Thanks again. I hope you keep reading.

BloodThirstyGoddess	01/30/06 - 01:35PM	9: 5.09: The First Law of Thermodynamics	Signed
Wow! That was great. The energy piece with Connor was a really creative idea. Love it! Can't wait for more!! Author's Response: Thanks. The energy is just something I just thought of a couple years ago actually. I really wanted to work it into a story and that;s what kind of inspired me to write this. Thanks for reading.

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