Reviews for New World Rising, Pt. 1
| Willes |
07/25/05 - 03:47PM |
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| I definantly think it should be sudden and crazy and spur of the moment. That would be much more in character for both. Can't wait to read more! |
| toshie |
07/17/05 - 02:28AM |
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| I vote sudden kiss - horror - shock - blaming each other - and I love a smug David - then hiding the romance from friends for a bit aka buffy and spike - denial is a beautiful thing!
Can't wait to read the next installment. |
| always angel |
07/15/05 - 10:13PM |
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| My name is Mindy not Rachel so you don't have to feel bad. I agree with gumboy about the kiss, spur of the moment followed by beatings. Lol. What can I say I love it when Elizabeth and David fight. |
| gogo_girlie |
07/15/05 - 08:25PM |
1: Ch. 1: Way of the World |
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| You are such the sweetie. Okay, they need the spur of the moment, just oh my gosh, wow what happened kind of kiss. I think it would fit better with their personalities. Since they're not exactly sugary to each other. lol. That's why we love 'em. |
| gumboy |
07/15/05 - 03:55PM |
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| Spur of the moment. Followed by many beatings. David? Still a jerk. Liz still has some sense to beat into him. |
| gumboy |
07/15/05 - 06:18AM |
8: Ch. 8: Snap |
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| Liz has a wonderful bedside manner. Please keep up with the beatings... |
| always angel |
07/15/05 - 12:47AM |
8: Ch. 8: Snap |
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| Ok first off I have to be a dork and say eep! for my name being in the story. Secondly, I love how Elizabeth and David both got in their fights to protect the other. Even if they do deny it. And lastly, three months of finals? Man I feel for them. Oh and I hope you keep updating everyday. |
| gogo_girlie |
07/14/05 - 02:09PM |
7: Ch. 7: Black Knight |
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| Elizabeth totally wants David, who totally wants her, so you need to hury up and totally put them together. Now that I've over used the word totally, I'll go now. Post more soon! :) |
| gumboy |
07/14/05 - 09:02AM |
7: Ch. 7: Black Knight |
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| Okay.... Dave did do the neanderthal thing and try to preserve Liz's "Honor". But the beatings must continue. |
| gumboy |
07/14/05 - 09:01AM |
6: Ch. 6: Mind Games |
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| Yep. David is still a jackass. Please continue to have Liz beat him into submission. |
| always angel |
07/14/05 - 02:24AM |
7: Ch. 7: Black Knight |
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| David is definatly like all the guys I know, ass holes one minute then sweet as syrup the next. |
| gumboy |
07/13/05 - 02:58PM |
5: Ch. 5: Lovers' Spat |
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Can I just state for the record that David Kane is a big jerk? He better develop some endearing traits quick.
I don't mean that as a criticism by the way. You've obviously set him up as the devilish rogue with a crusty outside but a squishy interior. You've captured the character so perfectly that I pretty much understand Liz's attraction/hatred toward him. Good job! Love the story. Keep it coming! |
| gogo_girlie |
07/13/05 - 01:30PM |
1: Ch. 1: Way of the World |
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| I am totally in love with this story and your writing. I'm right now on the edge of my seat waiting for another hcapter. Literally I'm grabbing my seat because your story is so frickin faboo! I can't wait for more! |
| toshie |
07/13/05 - 06:42AM |
6: Ch. 6: Mind Games |
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| oooo oooo oooo! Great story line! I like the character building - as well as trying to find out the intricacies of the rebellion... Please more... And keep going with Elizabeth's flirting! |
| Angelic_Rose |
07/12/05 - 07:44PM |
1: Ch. 1: Way of the World |
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| Very nice! I really enjoyed it! Update soon! |
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