Reviews for Serendipity
| redmoon |
08/15/05 - 10:20PM |
1: I |
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Wow, I didn't know script format could be so realistic. Somehow it's perfectly clear how each shot looks. You have amazing talent for this sort of work, not to mention your character interactions are 100% realistic. I'm hooked.
Author's Response: Aw, you didn't have to review back. But -thanks, (you're way, way too kind also). I'm glad you get a look of the scenes: weirdly enough, reading 'Fray' put me in that mindset. |
| gumboy |
06/23/05 - 09:00AM |
5: V |
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Wow! Such a great story and "The best is yet to come. "
Great Dialogue! Love the whole baseball training session and Connor being a big sissy girl. Please post more and soon...
Author's Response: I hope "the best is yet to come" isn't legally binding, heh. Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. For some reason I found this whole chapter really hard to write (even now, I'm not happy and might rewrite it when I have more time on my hands). It just didn't flow, so I'm glad it wasn't too unbearable to read. ;) Oh, and thank for recommending this fic, it's much appreciated. When I've more time for a mooch, I'll submit a list of my favourites. |
| gumboy |
06/16/05 - 08:03AM |
3: III |
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"No offense, but I think that’s something I like you to be sure about the in future." or "See, this is why I don't like to tell people" Soooo many good lines. Very Whedonesque. Very hard to choose which one is best. Your characters are great and your dialogue is top notch. That Owen is a funny guy... kind of what would happen if someone genetically mutated Oz, Xander with just a touch of Giles into one human shape form.
Keep up the good work because it keeps getting better.
Author's Response: You're way too kind, but thanks :)
I love it when people express their liking of Owen, because he wasn't even in my mind when I started writing this. He started out as "geeky guy who spills drink on Nira" - just someone who would serve to demonstrate her popularity. Now, I can't imagine it without him. He completed the wacky little world I've made up. |
| gumboy |
06/15/05 - 04:00PM |
2: II |
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You know for a story that only has one character from the ATS canon, I have to say I'm enjoying this immensely. Great dialogue... great characters and some pretty great moments to boot (especially Nira's comments to "shushy"). Keep it up...
Author's Response: I had a lot of problems working out what category to put this under: since it isn't that much with the ATS or BTVS fic. It's more Whedonverse, really. I'm glad you like the characters though. Thanks for the feedback! :) |
| gumboy |
06/15/05 - 12:46PM |
1: I |
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Color me intrigued! For a short chapter you've laid out a whole bevy of slayer goodness. I'm not going anywhere... so post soon darn it!
Author's Response: Hee. Thanks! I'd just been mooching your scripts actually, and liked what I saw (will be coming back for a proper read), so it's nice that I'd get feedback from you. More soon, definately. Thanks again Claire x |
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