Reviews for Second Beginnings
| Kevin |
05/19/06 - 11:21AM |
1: Memories |
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| Greta chapter. It's a really good setup for the rest of the story. I like Danw's blushing when she mentions Connor. Those two poor kids are meant for each other. WHich of course means they'll either never hook up, hook up too late, or both die horribly. I can't wait to see where you take this. |
| axel |
07/23/05 - 01:37AM |
5: Doing Violence |
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OK, Angel tried to suck her blood years ago, he's now he pissed?
Great story by the way, Cathern's a cool character, and I'm interested to see who Quin is.
Author's Response: Thanx. This is my first story so I'm glad you like it. |
| axel |
07/23/05 - 01:11AM |
3: Questions |
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| I meant to say good story, no story is God, AMEN. |
| axel |
07/03/05 - 12:11AM |
3: Questions |
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| She's a Slayer (Maybe), not a Vampire, but she's immortal, OK, you've got my attention. I'm gald guns back, even if he's in a wheelchair. So, god story so far. |
| filmtheory |
06/21/05 - 12:43PM |
1: Memories |
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Great start! You handled the exposition without getting boring and came up with really great back stories for everyone. I particularly like what you did with Gunn. Most people have him as either dead or fine. Your take on the situation was very unique, but made perfect sense. I hope the other chapters are just as good.
Author's Response: I hope you like the other hcapters too. This is my first fanfiction so it's nice to hear I might be doing something good. Thanx so much for the review. :) |
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