Reviews for The Watcher: Season 2
| redmoon |
08/25/05 - 10:46PM |
55: 2.11 Fitting in... Act IV |
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| Well, I'm glad it's finally out. And as usual it was definitely worth the wait. Funny in all the right places... angsty in all the other ones, so I applaud you yet again. Well done. (And yet I weep as I expect to have to wait at least as long for the next one.) *Sigh* But you know what they say about good things... |
| redmoon |
08/25/05 - 10:37PM |
54: 2.11 Fitting in... Act III |
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"...have very little to do with the spontaneous creation of jelly doughnuts." I think I'm going to print that off and frame it.
Author's Response: FYI: A Friend of mine e-mailed me to let me know that the quote seems to have been taken from an episode of Magnum PI. I don't remember seeing it but it appears to be the truth, so please make sure to give it proper credit where credit is due. |
| redmoon |
08/25/05 - 10:33PM |
54: 2.11 Fitting in... Act III |
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| Holy crap, I thought I was going to die laughing there, for a minute. "..starts whistling the theme from jeopardy..." The visualization of that will keep me smiling for weeks. Thanks, gum! |
| redmoon |
08/25/05 - 10:29PM |
53: 2.11 Fitting in... Act II |
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| Sweet deal! Seige equipment! And I like Whistler actually *doing* something, instead of being mister 'in-the-know'. Tucker's really not having a good day, is he? But then, hey, he can't complain that he's heard the word 'apocalypse', now can he? Good work! |
| faith_slayer89 |
08/25/05 - 01:51PM |
55: 2.11 Fitting in... Act IV |
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And once again I'm reminded why this story is one of my absolute favourites. :p Yeah, I read all of season one and what you had of season two in one sitting. Couldn't help it; it was that addictive. :) So, let's see, what can I say about this episode? Well, I burst out laughing about ten different times, the Tuesday references all killed me, loved the Knights of Byzantium making a comeback, Willow's minor slip of the tongue with Audrey cracked me up, and Liv is such a joker ("There's a fire poker over in the corner. Use that."). I'm starting to feel really bad for Liv and Tucker, because now that he's an actual member of the Odd Squad, well, they're pretty much doomed, aren't they? *sigh* Oh, and I guess I have you to thank for this little habit I've developed. Every time I see an odd-sounding word now, I read it backwards to see if it spells anything. :p Please please please write a new episode soon; don't make me wait as long as I did before. :)
Author's Response: Liv was joking? Are you sure about that? I'm pretty sure she was dead serious.
I had a lot of fun writing this episode and I'm sorry it took so long. Complications have arisen which are taking more and more of my regular writing time so my episodes won't be coming out as quick as they were before. But I will continue to write them. Just be patient with me.
Reading things backwards now are you? I bet you had fun with the Monk speaking Czech!! |
| teacosy |
08/25/05 - 01:08PM |
54: 2.11 Fitting in... Act III |
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At least you're not debating whether to rip off something from Doctor Who. Only without the Dalek (probably). Tucker and Liv are adorable - though I'm worried that outside of his MacGuyver powers he won't be up to much, fight-wise. I think he's best sticking to the research or he'll go the way of Brad. Will we see Jordy soon? I mean, not that I care. Not that I have an grossly innappropiate crush. Not that I think the wolfy eye thing is hot. I'll shut up.
Author's Response: Sorry about Jordy. He'll be back next episode. I promise. The whole MacGyver thing is just an idea I had about somebody with non-slayer powers against the supernatural. Not sure how much I like the idea though. |
| Fred |
08/23/05 - 07:18PM |
1: Previously On... |
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I have finally caught up to where you are and now have to cram everything i loved about it into one very long review, thing number 1: Audrey- loved this characters many similarities to Cordy (as well as Xander almost calling her Cordy) I've said it before and I'll say it again, your characters just seem to fit into the story as if they were always there on the show to! Thing number 2 I loved was the many stages of Pongo!- he was absolutely hilarious! Sad to see him go! Thing number 3 i loved: Xander Spike fights- I used to love it when Angel and spike started yelling at each other in Angel but this is just as good! You really got the dynamic perfectly!
Well i could go on forever about the things I loved but I fear that this review would span many pages if i did so, Please update soon!!!! PS; I'm not a Kennedy hater and i think you did a brilliant job of her death it was so sad!:(
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading... well... everything. I'm having a lot of fun writing it and that's pretty much the point to the whole thing. |
| axel |
08/20/05 - 10:53PM |
13: 2.3 The Velma: Act IV |
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First of all, the second season is as good as the first. But I felt I needed to say something, In my story, "South of Heaven" there are Zombie like creatures, Simalar to the Izithunela, and I just wanted to say that I didn't intentualy steal the Idea. I've never read this before now, and was as suprised as anyone, so sorry for any confusion.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. No worries about the zombie thing. I think only George Romero has rights to them. The izithunzela was actually something I picked up from an African folklore posting on the web. I liked it so much I used it. |
| GPN |
08/20/05 - 02:21PM |
41: 2.8 Here Endeth the Lesson: Act IV |
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I never liked Kennedy much... so I'm having mixed feelings.
Like the idea of the new Slayers being tested, I was thinking of using the same idea for my story.
Author's Response: Well... hopefully what happened to Kennedy didn't kill your interest. Looking forward to reading your story! |
| daedreams |
08/16/05 - 03:39PM |
1: Previously On... |
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Hey! I've neglected my reading of fanfic for several weeks now, so I had to do a quick catchup of your last 3 episodes. And great job, as usual! How much fun to have the adults go even younger this time. Plus having that be what makes Lucy be so honest and share her fears.
As always - looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: I had a lot of fun writing the "kid" sequences. Glad you're still reading! |
| twinblade |
08/15/05 - 07:37AM |
51: Obedience School: Part VI |
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Excellent work as always. As soon as I finish some writing stuff I have to do, I plan on writing a Xander story as well. He is my favorite.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Looking forward to your Xander story! |
| redmoon |
08/14/05 - 09:58PM |
51: Obedience School: Part VI |
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Exellent job (even more than usual, if I may say so) on Band Candy II. I can see how the third act took some doing, but what an act! I'm glad Liv's 'out' now with her boyfriend and he's 'cool' with it.
Long Live The Bastard! Maybe I'll write another Loki fic with that as the title. I love to hate him. Thanks so much for including him in your series! Obediece School was a great episode (and well placed at intervals). I can't wait to see if / when Jordy comes back all zen / kickass-wolfman and if Tucker ends up being the Xander of the Odd Squad (what with the research and the quirky comments).
Good job all around and definitely looking forward to more!
Author's Response: **THANK YOU** for letting me use Loki. I really had a good time weaving him into the storyline. Jordy will be coming back soon and Tucker will be definitely be adding something to the Odd Squad, though I wouldn't qualify him as a "Zeppo" just yet. |
| faith_slayer89 |
08/14/05 - 02:36AM |
51: Obedience School: Part VI |
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Best. Story. Ever. I am fully aware that you're not done, but I just had to say that. :) Well, I bet you've already heard how your plot's amazing, the characters are excellently-written, and everything just kicks ass. So I won't repeat it. Before I inflate your ego even further, a question. Or rather, an observation. I'm guessing you don't like Buffy much, what with her attitude when conversing with Lucy and all that. Eh. Just wondering. And is Angel going to crop back up, 'cause that'd be funny. And yay, Liv gets a solid love interest now! So if he can just stay alive (or retain his soul in the afterlife), then they're all set. Your story is so freaking amazing, I don't even know what else to say. It made me laugh (so much I'm getting weird looks from everyone), it made me tear up (again with the weird looks), it's just fantastic. Let's leave it at that. :)
Author's Response: Um... Did you just read everything in one day? Wow.
Actually I do like Buffy. Really. I do. I just really like writing her as a ditz for laughs. I'm not sure if Angel will make an appearance this season, but I haven't plotted out all the episodes yet.
Yes, Liv finally gets a boyfriend... but remember: Love on the Hellmouth usually leads to tragedy. |
| always angel |
08/13/05 - 11:03PM |
51: Obedience School: Part VI |
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Gotta say that Loki can be a major bastard at times.
Author's Response: Oh... Oh yeah... *COMPLETE* bastard. That's why I love him so. If you haven't yet, check out Redmoon's "Walking in Fear" and "The Man with a Thousand Faces" because what Redmoon does with him absolutely rocks.
Jordy will be back soon. Either the next episode or the one after that. |
| always angel |
08/13/05 - 10:54PM |
50: 2.10 Band Candy II: Act IV |
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I like that Tucker found out about Liv being a slayer. Liv desrves some happiness considering all the shit she goes through. Poor Lucy, her worries just keep increasing. And by the way, whens Jordy coming back?
Author's Response: Jordy will be coming back soon. Promise. As for Liv and love... well is anything safe on a hellmouth? |
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