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Reviews for Damaged: The Ongoing Story of Dana




axel 09/02/05 - 08:08PM 2: Episode 1.02: Beyond the Orlon Window Signed
Yes, I know Connor thought she was a hypocrite. but he seem mad at her as soon as she got there, like it was more than he just didn't want to help. maybe I'm just imagining it, I'll shut up now.

Author's Response: No, you'r enot imagining it. Connor was angry as soon as Willow arrived. But Riley made a pint of mentioning that this particular supplier (Connor) *really* didn't like being bothered. He doesn't want to go back into that world when his father literally sold his soul to get Connor out of it.

rockangelz25 06/06/05 - 09:47PM 2: Episode 1.02: Beyond the Orlon Window Signed
I like it--still liking its focus on Dana. ALso liking the Connorness--his overall emotions. And his reaction to Riley was great. Glad you did let him into the story. Please keep going, short chapters or long. It's awesome, and I love the way you write the characters.

Author's Response: Thanks. This is one of my less viewed and reviewed stories, so your feedback is really appreciated.

Monkey Pants 05/20/05 - 06:50PM 2: Episode 1.02: Beyond the Orlon Window Signed
“Don’t worry,” Connor said. “I might not look like much, but I’m full of surprises.”.........It was only a matter of time before Connor found his way into another story! You write Connor really well, speaking as a non-Connor fan, though I think I may have said that in one of your other fics, but in a way i hope he isn't as big a character in this story, as I think you have a great potentail to focus on some of the other characters around Dana. Nice Star Wars reference, which is really in with the times :) And did I just sense an annoying Riley ready to cause trouble? And is it just me, or sid I sense chemistry between Xander and Dana? I'm really interested to see how this fic turns out, so I hope you do continue with it.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. As I probably told you before, I'm a pretty big fan of Connor. Anyone who cuts off a drug dealer's ear and sinks Angel into the Pacific is alright by me. However, I actually wanted to keep him out of this story compeletely. After a while, though, I realized I was doing more work to keep him out and it wasn't really natural. Thus, Connor. How much he'll be in it, i can't say. Xander/ Dana chemistry. Hmmmm . . . Xander certainly is protective of her. Whether anything else happens, you'll jsut have to wait and see.. thanks again for reading.

axel 05/15/05 - 10:31PM 2: Episode 1.02: Beyond the Orlon Window Signed
The story is shapeing up pretty well. I don't really understand conner's anger at willow though, wasn't angel the one that let him down, but it's still a good story.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Connor was angry at Will because she was trying to guilt him into helping and he felt she was being a hypocrite. She was saying he should help Dana for moral reasons, but the only reason Willow wants to help Dana is because of what Dana can do for Willow. Glad you like the story. It's definitely one of my less popular ones.

gumboy 05/15/05 - 09:30PM 2: Episode 1.02: Beyond the Orlon Window Signed
Glad to see you are working on this section some more. I'm interested to see where you take Dana & Co. on this trip.

Author's Response: Thanks. The story (much like Angel season 6) is getting many reads or revies, so it's nice to know people are reading. It's kind of ironic. I wrote thsi story with shorter chapters than most of my stoiries thinking that some of the longer chapters were scaring peole away. Now it almost seems as if the opposite is true. Any way, long story short- thanks for your interest. Hope I can keep it.
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