Reviews for Cruse of Dark Shadows.
| filmtheory |
09/19/05 - 02:42AM |
5: 1975 part 1 |
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I was a little nervous about you repeating the Dark Shadows time travel story line, but you're definitley taking it in a n original direction. I love Michael being a Giles/Ripper-esque figure messing with the dark arts at college. Keep going!
Author's Response: No apologies for the time travel (although I did lost a lot of readers after that), because it was always a big part of the Dark Shadows mythology. And part of the reson I did this was, I didn't like the way Shadows ended (really it didn't end). Thanks for the review. |
| filmtheory |
09/19/05 - 02:31AM |
4: Collinwood 2005 part 3 |
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By *not* telling us the worst of what Emily has endured, you really let our imaginations run wild. Well done. Awesome teaser as well. I like that Michael is a tougher ghost than Willow expected and Kennedy being trapped is awesome. Can’t wait to see where it goes next.
Author's Response: I'm glad you felt bad for Emily, I was worried that I made her more annoying than sympathedic. Poor Kennedy, I hated doing that to her. But, as you've probably guessed, Willow's job is to change what happened. And if it was just about the Collins family, she might think she shouldn't change the past, but now she has a personal reason. Thanks for the reveiw. |
| filmtheory |
08/11/05 - 01:42AM |
3: Collinwood 2005 part 2 |
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Yikes. Still with the creepy introductions. I love them- so much like “Dark Shadows.” We get to meet Michael, but you’re not rushing in the other characters, which I think is the way to go. I also loved the back story of Kennedy’s relation to the Collins. Until now, I thought she was Kennedy Collins, but I like that she was an odd descendant who didn’t know the house was coming to her. Also- I LOVED Kennedy’s line about beating up computer nerds. Poor Willow.
Author's Response: Hey, Willow strated it, with the short bus coment. I'm one of the few people that liked Kennedy (Which I know has probably cost me readers) Plus, she had a mouthon her (as where Oz was quite, and Tara seemed like she was a sleep, well, she did). They tease each other, but there just playing. By the way, I didn't think having Kennedy Collin, would work, again I like Kennedy, but the truth is she's more a means to an end in this story. I had to find a way to have the two would's come together. It couldn't just be (Buffy and her friends break down one day, in frount of a house) It was to far fetched to have her be a Collin, but she did come from money, so a distant reallitive, works for me. (Shut up Axel) anyway Thanks for the review, and on a final note (Shadows music start's, and voiceover) Poor Willow, indeed.
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Author's Response: Sorry, about the bad spelling in my response (Damn Keyboard, acting up again). |
| peggstarr |
07/04/05 - 12:27AM |
1: intorduction |
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I like your concept and I LOVE DARK SHADOWS! I used to watch it every frisday with my pop! And I can really see Kennedy being a Collins!
Author's Response: well, I'm glad you can see it, because I knew it was a strech, but she did come from money, so it makes sence (right) Thanks for the review. |
| filmtheory |
06/21/05 - 12:56PM |
2: Collinwood 2005 part 1 |
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I loved “Dark Shadows”, so I think it’s so cool that you did this. The beginning was great. Very ominous. (“One believes that it now belongs to her, when in truth they will soon belong to it.”) I also loved the heart problems line. That was hysterical. That back story between Will and Buffy was sad, but I can buy it. I also love how you tied Faith’s fate in with your other story.
Author's Response: I'm gald you liked the story, I don't know why no ones had this idea before, so I decided to do it after I finnished my other, story (Two at a time, just seemed to much like work). but I couldn't wait. Thank for the reveiw. |
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