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SakuraSyaoran4eva 02/09/06 - 08:28PM 17: Chapter Seventeen Signed
I really do like this story. Yet, there are a few instances where I think you'd be better off w/ a beta. You're very good w/ characterization, this is very creative and well thought out - but there are quite a bit of spelling/grammer mistakes. I catch myself continually wishing this could be a Dawn/Spike pairing as they're so close - I doubt you'll so that just as much as I doubt you'll do the Spuffy thing. Angel/Buffy? Please? There's totally nothing better then some Angel-Buffy romance. And it would work out well b/c then Hank would get to know ANgel, would find out about that period in Buffy's life and hello! It's Angel! The whole Hank conversation thing is just a bonus. Lol. Hopin Angel drops in soon, SS4EVA PS. Liked what you did, w/ the sign thing. I'm hopin B will forgive the Gman soon - cuz he's way more her father then Hank in every way possible (though u hav managed to redeem him)

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I actually do have a beta, but it's difficult to catch every spelling a grammar error. If you could tell me where the ones you found are then I can fix them. I'd really appreciate it. I should probably point out that I'm Canadian, so I spell colour with a u, as well as honour, and programme with the extra "me".

I'm glad you're enjoying the Dawn/Spike elements of the story. I was really upset when that friendship was just dropped from the show. I'm actually not planning any real 'ships for this story.

Thanks for the review!


spuffylover23 07/31/05 - 01:58AM 17: Chapter Seventeen Signed
I really hope it will have more spuffiness in the future but so far I really like it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I'm not going to lie to you, I don't see it heading in the direction of Spuffy, simply becuase I want to focus on Buffy's relationships with her father figures.

MissEdith 05/04/05 - 09:17PM 17: Chapter Seventeen Signed
Very nice. The janitor's closet was a nice touch! If only Hell's Bells had really turned out that way... :(

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, the end of Hells Bells just never seemed right to me. Glad you liked the chapter.
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