Reviews for Fallen Angel
| filmtheory |
06/03/05 - 12:17PM |
2: Ghost |
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| Wow- you really have the characters down. Angel is very much the "Must do right" guy while Cordy is only half there. She wants to help when she gets the vision, but once somoene puts her in danger, she's ready with the name calling. The plot is great as well. It's something that was touched on in the show, but it never dealt with someone the audience didn't know as someone addicted and dangerous, but ultimately needing help. |
| Monkey Pants |
05/20/05 - 06:53PM |
1: The Magick Tantrum |
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| A good set up of plot, you really manage to write the characters well. It feels like watching an angel episode of yore... |
| Pocket Jericho |
05/01/05 - 03:35AM |
5: Bird-Like |
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| "You're just predictable"
Loved that line and the ending was a major surprise. Well done. Keep it up and I will wait for more. |
| Pocket Jericho |
04/30/05 - 01:53AM |
4: Meditation and Songs |
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Loren! Lorne's a great character and, like the others, you've cpatured him brilliantly here. This is certainly a very entertaining, and thoughtfully written story. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your reviews! I was beginning to lose hope that anyone would respond at all. :) |
| Pocket Jericho |
04/30/05 - 01:52AM |
3: From hate to merely dislike |
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| What I love about this third chapter is the way your original character of Ghost interacts with Angel, Wes and Cordy. It's a very real, tangible thing. I enjoyed this greatly. |
| Pocket Jericho |
04/30/05 - 01:51AM |
2: Ghost |
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| Second chapter even better than the first. Once again everyone is in character and your original character is nothing short of amazing. |
| Pocket Jericho |
04/30/05 - 01:51AM |
1: The Magick Tantrum |
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| Loved it. Massively appealing and everyone was right on in the in-characterness department. very, very good story. |
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