Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 05/13/2011 - 08:44 pm
Title: Chapter 21
You have great plot ideas, and are pretty good at dialogue, but you are "telling" instead of "showing" a lot of the "action."
Reviewer: silverforest11
Anonymous
Date: 04/11/2010 - 08:15 pm
Title: Chapter 25
awesome story!!!!!
Reviewer: Jessy Signed
Date: 12/21/2007 - 07:05 pm
Title: Chapter 2
Sorry, I just confused the fics... Please ignore my last review.
Author's Response: Thank is okay.
Reviewer: Jessy Signed
Date: 12/21/2007 - 06:33 pm
Title: Chapter 2
Why would he still be tied up? She let him touch her son, and then tie him up? :S
Author's Response: Don't worry we all make mistakes, gets confusing when you read alot of fics.
Reviewer: Alien
Anonymous
Date: 11/23/2007 - 09:02 am
Title: Chapter 25
I read it, and even thought its a good idea I didt like the sty in which you wrote it. I´¨m not yoused to reading stroy in presnt tense. its a orginal style but it doesnt fit my prefered writing styles.
Author's Response: Sorry the style wasn't for you, I have been trying to write my other stories in past tense, but this one was already written and typed.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 11/22/2007 - 06:18 pm
Title: Chapter 25
Excellent fic! Hope you write the sequel!
Author's Response: Not sure if there is it won't be for a while.
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 11/21/2007 - 10:57 am
Title: Chapter 25
So Buffy can walk again! :) That's good! :) Liked the ending. / Ariadne
Author's Response: THank you.
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 11/16/2007 - 02:57 am
Title: Chapter 24
Oh, what a great chapter! Loved :)
Author's Response: Thanks
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 11/14/2007 - 06:00 pm
Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 11/09/2007 - 08:55 am
Title: Chapter 23
Oh, the new house! I wonder how they will decorate it? :)
Author's Response: I wonder.
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 11/04/2007 - 10:13 am
Title: Chapter 22
Great update! :)
Author's Response: Thanks
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 10/25/2007 - 01:16 pm
Title: Chapter 21
Aww, Willow and Tara :) So sweet. So Buffy and Spike are looking for a house. Nice :)
Author's Response: well this is season 4 so yeah Willow and Tara are getting the start, sort of dropped hints chapter 4 or 5.
Thanks.
Reviewer: secretguest
Anonymous
Date: 10/24/2007 - 08:36 pm
Title: Chapter 21
Love it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 10/24/2007 - 05:32 pm
Title: Chapter 21
Really great chapter! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 10/17/2007 - 06:09 pm
Title: Chapter 20
Really loving this! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 10/17/2007 - 11:44 am
Title: Chapter 19
Oh, I must have missed this chapter...
Good update :)
Author's Response: no worries had some problems last week and start of this so some were posted late in day or not posted.
Thanks
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 10/17/2007 - 11:42 am
Title: Chapter 20
So Buffy's going home :)
Author's Response: Yep she is going home.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 10/10/2007 - 06:43 pm
Title: Chapter 19
Loved the spuffy chapter! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks
Reviewer: secretguest
Anonymous
Date: 10/10/2007 - 03:42 pm
Title: Chapter 19
She's getting better! Love it!!
Author's Response: Yep only a few more left.
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 10/05/2007 - 02:07 am
Title: Chapter 18
I hope she'll recover. Spike takes good care of her :)
Author's Response: he does, I really wanted to capture his sensitive side we saw with Dru.
Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: v4viper
Anonymous
Date: 10/03/2007 - 09:22 pm
Title: Chapter 18
Such a great story depth and spuffy.
Author's Response: thank you
Reviewer: secretguest
Anonymous
Date: 10/03/2007 - 07:06 pm
Title: Chapter 18
Poor Buffy. Hope things get a lil better soon!!!
Author's Response: I am sure they will.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 10/03/2007 - 04:42 pm
Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2007 - 08:23 pm
Title: Chapter 17
Love it! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: yep more will come.
Reviewer: kw
Anonymous
Date: 09/26/2007 - 10:11 pm
Title: Chapter 17
Glad to see the recovery
Author's Response: Thanks it will be a slow process.
