Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 07/06/2014 - 03:54 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Autor. It was good. The thing only, even just as human, cannot believe Buffy would be ok with deqd people, but it is your story, and I enjoyed it, so thank You.
Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 07/06/2014 - 11:18 am
Title: Chapter Three
Hm, what is it with neck biting? Is he a vampire fter all?
Reviewer: ScoobyDawn
Anonymous
Date: 11/15/2012 - 11:06 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I really enjoyed this fic, having Buffy choosing to join him rather than lose him for once was a nice change. She wasn't Buffy the Slayer so I had no problems with the characterisation. Great story.
Reviewer: ScoobyDawn
Anonymous
Date: 11/15/2012 - 08:05 am
Title: Chapter Seven
This has got to be one of the hottest Spike's I've read and that is no mean feat!!
Reviewer: ScoobyDawn
Anonymous
Date: 11/15/2012 - 04:07 am
Title: Chapter Five
I want one! (sorry husband!!)
Reviewer: ScoobyDawn
Anonymous
Date: 11/14/2012 - 09:36 pm
Title: Chapter One
God I'm jealous!!
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 10/02/2012 - 02:32 am
Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I loved this; I think the tale is beautifully told. I have to say, as a hater of sad endings, I actually can see that a sad ending would have been artistically beautiful ... Spike's fears and sorrow at turning Buffy seemed like foreshadowing to me; so much so, I think I had more trouble than Spike at believing that Vamp!Buffy turned out to be sufficiently Buffy in the end.
I don't love the decision to turn her, though I do inderstand your reasons, and that was where the story was headed the whole time.
Spike's and Buffy's reasons for the decision to turn her were less believable. Human!Buffy despaired of Spike's status and actions at the top of the food chain, but for some reason had no moral qualms about introducing another predator to the human race. I guess she figured once she was turned, she wouldn't have a conscience so all's well that end's well for her, but how, as a concerned human, could she stomach that result? And Spike was so concerned she'd be so changed she wouldn't be Buffy anymore but threw caution to the wind and decided "hell with it?" His actions were better explained, since he seemd to acknowledge his hypocrisy, knowing he'd turn her in the end despite his protests to Buffy.
I wonder if the plot turn needed more development to bring the reader to the place where that was really the only reasonable option.
All in all, I really did enjoy this. I was sucked in right away. Loved the dialogue, it fairly sparkles. Love Anya, glad you included her. Would love to have some info on how the story resolved for her.
Very well written. A new (to me) favorite story from a favorite author.
Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed
Date: 01/18/2011 - 04:23 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Great story. So glad I read it over. It was better the second time.
Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed
Date: 01/17/2011 - 06:01 pm
Title: Chapter One
I had to read this story again. It was so good the first time and is even better the second go. You are such a talented writer.
Reviewer: Mage21 Signed
Date: 07/20/2010 - 04:34 am
Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Interesting story and a captivating read. Nicely and realistically written.
Reviewer: AMI Signed
Date: 08/16/2009 - 03:49 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Just reread this again in one sitting. God, I loved it . Great story...passionate, beautiful, angsty ,hot and perfect Spuffy as always! You did a great job.
I miss your fics Addie, you are one of my fave Spuffy authors. Hopefully you're still writing, if not thanx for all your great stories.
Reviewer: Emma
Anonymous
Date: 06/30/2009 - 07:55 am
Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
i love all your writing, and the ending of this, its your story, you can make it end any way you like! I think it is great, thought i had read everything spuffy you had written, was v excited to find a new-to-me story
Reviewer: Cat
Anonymous
Date: 06/17/2009 - 03:09 am
Title: Chapter Two
“Leave before I puke on you. Because I so will.” That is most definitely one of the best lines I've ever read. Too brilliant. It made me review out of sheer amazingness. Btw, I've run into you on various sites over the years and always enjoyed your stuff. Sorry to read about all these flame problems you seem to have. Quite lame. You're definitely one of my favorites.
Reviewer: Elodie Wolfe
Anonymous
Date: 04/10/2009 - 10:32 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I love the fact that you actually explain your ideas in end notes, even though readers shouldn't get so riled up enough to flame and the such.
Okay with that part done. Dang. I wish I could write even a tenth of how you write. The change was amazing. I love how you made it dark and this story is probably one of my top three fav non canon fics. At the moment I can't name the other two, but shh. ;)
I absolutely loved reading this and I think that you wrote these two and Rile *pukes* perfectly.
Reviewer: Elodie Wolfe
Anonymous
Date: 04/10/2009 - 09:59 pm
Title: Chapter Six
I forget sometimes that Giles has that angry side to him. Ahahah. Great job! That last part about him going after Finn made me laugh. I'm loving this!
Elodie~
Reviewer: Elodie Wolfe
Anonymous
Date: 04/10/2009 - 09:51 pm
Title: Chapter Three
So I've read some of your stuff before and had loved it so I came to read this. Absolutely wonderful and very well written. There are so many writiers on this site and I can maybe name three that I'm totally in love with and you are deff one of them. This story is just hot, and the balance of leading in romance and the angst to come is amazing. I love all flufffy but I know what you mean bout the balance, just makes the stories more believable. Well the human ones anyways. Haha. Anyways. I'm going to finish reading this. :) Great job again! I love how you write. ten million stars!
Reviewer: Olinka
Anonymous
Date: 11/09/2008 - 03:06 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
another great story. Thanks for an awesome read!
Reviewer: spuffy chick
Anonymous
Date: 11/03/2008 - 01:43 am
Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
wow! i loved it! i love all your stories.
Reviewer: Porcelain-Shadow17
Anonymous
Date: 08/26/2008 - 02:21 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Like, OMG. Luv it :)
It's a little smutty for me and i was forced to skip some bits :P Bu i just love the plott :)
I feel sad that Riley died. He was a prick but he was so nice in the show it's hard to see him go...
Anywaaaay
luv it and hope to see more of ur work :)
xo
Reviewer: Angie
Anonymous
Date: 06/06/2008 - 09:52 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I enjoyed this story very much. I don't think any other ending would have done it justice.
Reviewer: Angie
Anonymous
Date: 06/06/2008 - 09:51 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I enjoyed this story very much. I don't think any other ending would have done it justice.
Reviewer: insert_confusion_here@hotmail.com
Anonymous
Date: 06/01/2008 - 06:36 pm
Title: Chapter Eight
I love this story so far. Great sex, a great plot in the making. Also, the last little bit about marriage and how Riley wants Buffy to need him is sending my inner feminist Bitchy Cat into hysterics. I love it!
Reviewer: AbbyLou Signed
Date: 04/22/2008 - 02:30 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Absolutely, positivly loved this fic!!! I was suprised that I actually like the idea of Spike turning Buffy but it worked out well!! Great Job!!
Reviewer: Duchess Michelle Signed
Date: 04/18/2008 - 04:24 pm
Title: Chapter Thirteen
Love the story so far! And I'm gonna keep reading it! And then look at some of your other fics. :D Love it! Love it!
Reviewer: sc
Anonymous
Date: 04/04/2008 - 07:57 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I really liked it. Thanks so much.